Cloaked Mystery

@theduckator

oops

I totally disappeared again lol

sorry hahaha

Omc that’s awesome! but sad because you won’t get as much free time :/

Making money is AWESOME lolll

I did the survey 👍

I’m gonna do Rax, but this is going to be him after the events that happen in story that I’m writing.

1. What is your full name?

“Lord Rax Forge.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

Rax grins, almost chuckling to himself, “Well, I am the Pyromancer. The wielder of fire.”

3. What is your body language…

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@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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@whalekeeper

I’m down to do something like this.

@whalekeeper

That’s awesome! If you guys have any questions just let me know. And if you you guys are confused about the rules in the middle of a game/session, just make it up so that it can keep the game moving. It’s better to have fun making up rules than spending 30 minutes trying to find a rule like; how high you can jump standing still or…[Read more]

@theducktator

Praying for you.

@keilah-h

The thing looks like it wants to spray acidic vomit at me. Either that or bite me and make me turn radioactive. So it dyin’, no matter what.

@theducktator you heard me right

YAY!! Rax and Ben get to do something finally! Barnes is interesting though…

@whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka

Rax and Ben

The teacher gave both Rax and Ben a startle, and Rax at first was a bit rebellious. Being under a tyrant all his life he wanted to not be under anyone right now. Ben knew exactly what Rax was thinking, “If you don’t lower…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Mateo

Mateo saw that his friend had sat down, and he sat in a place where many people were unfamiliar to him. So, Mateo did what he seemed to be the normal thing to do and that is to stand behind him, like a dog loyal to his master.

@loopylin @theducktator @keilah-h

He looks like an alien and if he was coming at me, no matter the size, I would kill it.

@the_lost-journal

lol! I forget important things too XD

@keilah-h Hurrah! I might add one sometime in the future, but not right now