Cloaked Mystery

After my google searches, now I’m a little sad, because it’s scientifically proven that your brain can’t come up with original faces. So although our character’s personalities are original, their physical attributes are not 😥 it’s really cool but also a little sad lol

Another quote from google:

your brain cannot make up faces in a truly new,…

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@ellette-giselle

I’ve always been able to clearly picture mine.

This is really interesting to me. Like, you can clearly see their facial features as if they were real, and as if they were standing in front of you? Is it vivid or fuzzy? Were you only able to picture them after you drew them or did they sort of just pop up in your mind one d…[Read more]

@loopylin

Here’s a weird thing I realized while reading the portals story and I need to tell someone. Do you guys actually picture your characters’ faces in your minds while you write them to the point where you could recognize them if you met them irl?

No I can’t either.

I just looked it up, and apparently your brain can’t come up with faces on…[Read more]

@everyone

Is it just me or is KP not letting us change our profile pictures :/

I know I haven’t been replying but I’m praying for everyone.

@esther-c @anyone-else

Actually yes. Just yesterday we talked with my doctor. I’ve been on Doxy since July 27th, and we had labs done again August 14th. I’m feeling better, but my labs look terrible, so I have four more weeks of Doxy before I’m done.

Thx for checking in <3

@theducktator

I’ll let you know if I need any extra help! I have your email as well (:

@hybridlore

Once the others email me back, I’ll see if I have any more nagging questions or things that stump me that I might need your help with haha

I already have your email soooo I’ll just email you when I’m ready!!!

@esther-c

omcccc I’m so sorry I didn’t respond lol

Is it okay if we email about it? Where should I post mine?

@whalekeeper

Your drawing is soft and sweet, i love it!

@loopylin

I do not. I can see vague impressions and shapes, and I can know what their individual physical attributes are, but I can’t put them together into a face in my mind. It’s weird. Idk if it’s normal either.

I can picture the faces of people I know, though.

@whalekeeper

That looks so good, I love how the face is so simple but clean, it looks like it belongs in a picture book.

@linus-smallprint

Oooh that’s a good idea!!

And I like your ideas too…I feel like that would be really cool if we did something like that

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

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@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3