Cloaked Mystery

@whalekeeper

It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.

Thanks.

But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)

Also, I really, reall…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

It, indeed, was Lucy. She tumbled unceremoniously from the mass of black feathers. The crow shifted its attention from the shiny silver, to her, and she ran, the crow chasing after her.

Gabriel’s blades were out in a moment, boots digging into the ground as he r…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The problem is not what I want to write, I just genuinely hate my writing style right now.

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

As the crows above cackled and argued, Gabriel’s attention was drawn to something silver falling from the tower. A crow dived after it, and among its black feathers was a spot of color on its back. Gabriel cal…[Read more]

Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.

Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.

I’d been going through…[Read more]

@loopylin

LOLLLL! Yes!

Why do you think I didn’t eat any Cranberry Sauce of Thanksgiving??

(fr though, it was because I’m a picky person about recipes, and it was the wrong recipe)

Really not my best work, his lips are wayyy to small

I finished this…and then realized it was terrible…

Not any of my ocs, btw, this was a trade for someone on Unvale

And after over 12 hours, I return.

@whalekeeper

I had to pull out a plot device

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

The shadowy form of the bird faded slowly into the mist, and Gabriel’s heart sunk. He couldn’t wait, he’d have to hope the crow kept its steady direction, and enter the maze to pursue it. He adjusted his mask, pulling the red ribbon t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It might be a little bit before I reply, I need to think and my brain has died. Sorry 🙁 .

@whalekeeper

Gabriel has ornithophobia now. I’m making this so hard for him

So mean lol. My poor innocent little charrie

All good, I’ve done worse to him…

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

Gabriel swung up the wall on the ampitheatre again, watching the bird fly away, looking over the many passages of the maze, hoping to find a way to follow. As…[Read more]

Thank you everyone 💜💜💜

@mineralizedwritings

omc like when we were doing the Character Party RP…that was insane, like I would check KP at least 10 times every day 😭😂

@theducktator

ik what you mean…writing’s been hard for me lately :/and I’ve been busy too!

@whalekeeper @loopylin

i love pulling up old discussions and reminiscing old times…not to mention making my…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

AHHH! It’s so good!!!!! I love it!

@grcr @loopylin

I am OBSESSED!

The poses are so good!

When I see that someone has posted art on here:

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

“Lucy!” His heart pounded in panic, a hammer inside his ribcage. He was helpless to rescue her, his blades weren’t for throwing even if he tried. He had no projectile weapons. He looked around frantically, and his eyes alighted on pieces of broken stone on the ground. He dropped down, hoping the bird w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The Protector — Gabriel Mai

Gabriel climbed up the wall himself, but instead of looking to the southeast, his attention was raptured by something more south. “Flying creatures. Those won’t be fun to fight.” After watching them for a few seconds, he finally looked for the hill, barely making it out through the silver mist. “I see t…[Read more]

I’m sorry I took so long to reply

@whalekeeper

Gabriel Mai — The Protector

He wasn’t sure what to do, so he stayed where he was and listened to the wind. He caught strange scents in the invisible wisps, most he had never smelled before, a few he vaguely recognized, but couldn’t decide how. His gaze wandered to the trees, then he turned to Lucy, whispering softly in case she w…[Read more]