Cloaked Mystery

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Mateo

Mateo broke his gaze with Celarent to look at his little friend. He contemplated for a moment, then spoke, “Fine, but you,” he pointed at Celarent, “Better choose your words more carefully.”

@koshka

Okay, so my brain has been reading things with interesting twists to words. I literally just read that as “We’ve reached 500 papayas, guys.”

I almost choked on my yogurt XD

@loopylin

Chase

Chase was confused. Did she not know if this person was a friend or not? “D-does he l-like f-faw, fawwwns?” It was random, and not the best type of q…[Read more]

If I can, I will post my drawings today. I just have the 1 hour one left to do

@theducktator

Agh yes I am lol

I’ve missed being on here :/

I’ve been so busy between school and work! (I recently got a job at a coffee shop which is good because I get money! But hard because I don’t have as much free time anymore!)

@theducktator @whalekeeper @esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @grcr

I wrote some new chapters!

They’re really, REALLY rough but hopefully you guys enjoy them

(It gives me motivation to be able to share what I wrote with people, so thank you for supporting me 😊💜)

@whalekeeper

OMC

I’m so sorry!

I don’t think this popped up in my email so I never saw it *cries*

How am I just now seeing this?!

Anyways, that makes a lot of sense!

I will think about that XDXD

And don’t worry about the length, I enjoyed reading your thoughts!!!!

@esther-c

Sorry, I don’t read Middle-grade fiction, so I won’t be much help

@loopylin

Chase

Chase hesitated. “I-I…” he fell silent, shaking his head. “N-no i-dea. W-who’s Lo-Lo-is?”

I’m sorry guys, Mateo might kill someone soon… or blow something up

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Mateo

Mateo suddenly stopped playing. “How about I end yours?” His voice became lower, his eyes pierced Celarent’s, striking fear into him in Mateo’s unnatural way.

@loopylin

but gave up before finishing

#relatable

The body language and expressions in the 1st and 4th panels especially are amazing XD

@loopylin

Chase

Chase got up, leaving his soda can beside where he was sitting. He retrieved Felicity’s can, planning to throw it away in the proper place later. He sat back down again.

“L-like s-sun…sat?” Chase was quiet and still for a moment, before turning to look at Felicity. He had formed his eyes into a reflection of a bright sunset.…[Read more]

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for responding!

@theducktator

First off, funny forum signature.

Second, what are the ages of your characters? because in my experience, different ages respond differently to death. Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand. Adults, especially people in their 20s, and 40s, for whatever…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes, much better. My stomach ache went away in the night, and hasn’t come back yet. Still aren’t sure what exactly was going on.

Thank you to everyone who prayed for me!

@elishavet-pidyon

A secret squirrel kingdom deep in the heart of the oldest woods? A band of exiles with unknown crimes in their pasts? I am intrigued.

YAY! I had a good idea!

It’s redundant to say the squirrels are good at hiding twice. It made this bit feel like it was going in circles, which is sad because it’s an important part of that int…

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@ellette-giselle

The answer is “no.”

Gasp! How did you know?! lol

@whalekeeper @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

Mateo

Mateo looked at his friend with a quizzical look and shook his head. “Never heard of it. Is it a place where you fight? Blow stuff up? … Play music.” Mateo then started to play a happy Mexican melody.

The answer is yes if you can’t hear the sarcasm