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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah, that’s fine. I was thinking about adding another too.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
The goal is undecided. They just got here, and they haven’t met the person who hired them yet.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Selius
”You’re insane,” Selius said shaking his head. “I just want to know where are we?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Selius
“Wond?” Selius repeated. “Combat science? What are either of you talking about?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I didn’t notice it either.
Selius
Selius eyed the woman incredulously. “What–? You have no idea what you’re talking about.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 3 weeks ago
A “hard” drink refers to alcohol. A “soft” drink is a non-alcoholic drink.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
(I’m going to have Dalton start inside the haunted house, because there’s no way he would go in willingly.)
Dalton
Dalton blinked awake. It was dark. The floor was hard, but it felt like it was made of wood, not the dry earth he should have been lying on.
He was back in the nightmare.
No. No!
He sat up, panicking.
But wait, this wasn’t the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh okay. Maybe make that more obvious somehow. You could spell in speedearing, which looks more distinct. It’s easy to not notice when the only difference is the repetition of a letter.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 3 weeks ago
That’s baking soda. How’s this, we all start calling them “soft drinks” then we can stop arguing.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
The only thing I noticed was this:
“Nahim, I still think you should have joined the speeder races. Your speedering is excellent.”
“My brother’s speedeering was exquisite.” A small point was made on the last word.
“Speedeering? What kinda of a word is that?”
Mandin used “speedering” first, but then he calls Nahim out on the word when he uses it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I never said you were the only one, you’re just wrong 😆
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 11 months, 3 weeks ago
As far as personalities go, I think most of my characters are often a lot like me in some ways, but then polar opposite in others. I think it’s easier to write characters that are very much like you and characters that are not like you at all than any shade in between that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s a z not an s
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Those people didn’t choose to have brown eyes, and if they had a choice, I doubt many people would pick to.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 11 months, 3 weeks ago
For hair colors, I’ve done most of the normal ones: black (probably the most common for me), brown, blond. I haven’t done red, but I kind of want to for some reason.
For eye colors, I do blue the most, because it’s the most common except brown, and who wants brown eyes? I’ve also done gray and yellow. I don’t think I’ve done green though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Off the top of my head, I can only think of two things that are particularly common amongst my characters:
- Most are introverted. I can barely think of any who are extroverts, although there are some I’m not sure about.
- Most are in the range of 17 – 30. I have barely any younger than that, and a significant lower amount of older ones.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I was telling @HighScribe it wouldn’t work, not suggesting it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m not sure if that would hurt Gunslinger, and if he just shot her first…
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