Jessi Rae

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@rochellaine. Well, sometimes my cousins call me Sylvester, so maybe you are calling me.;)

@rochellaine I think dragons might still exist some places on the earth, and I do believe that there used to be lots of them.  But dragons are viewed kind of like unicorns are.  Maybe there were unicorns as well? 🙂

@rochellaine  Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:

“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”

@rochellaine  Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀

The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉

@rochellaine By the way, what is with “Sylvester!” if you dont mind me asking?

@rochellaine Maybe if its a serious poem, use a fear of something that isnt as fantasized as dragons are.  If its a comical poem, then use whatever imaginary creatures you can find.  Even still, I love it!  Its an awesome poem.  Dont take my advice because I said so, because I still have tons to learn!

Oops.  I spelled force like forse.  Sorry about that.  Sorry its such a lousy part, but I wasnt sure what else to write.

“Where do you think your going?”  Akira asks, pushing me back onto the bed.  Tears begin to form in my eyes.  I pull myself up again with trembling hands and forse my eyes to focus.  “The Ravine.”

Akira’s blond head shakes back and forth.  “Are you out of your mind?”

“Please!”

“No.  You can’t.  Just look at yourself!  I know you want to get it,…[Read more]

@Ethryndal

@Kate-Flournoy And HOW, pray tell, do you expect me to pick up the pieces after THAT masterpiece of an epic??? Good grief, child, that was incredible.

Story #2, part nine

Mr. Shelind said nothing as he rose to tower above Freda, his eyes glowing with that unearthly orange. He took a step forward, his figure warping as fear spiked in Freda’s h…[Read more]

@sam-kowal. Dear Stan, most eloquent of dragons, I give thee thanks from the depths of my heart for the warm greeting bestowed upon me!  I am indeed grateful for the hearty welcomes of the kapeefers and excited to be here among such talented writers and creautures!  You are the first dragon I have ever heard of that has a taste for raspberries,  …[Read more]

would your character rather travel in time, but only to the future, never backwards, or be able to go back in time but only to one spot in time.

Between periods of unconsciousness, I hear mumbling voices above me, including my brother’s voice. I feel warmth from the bathing water and from the fire, which I hear crackling to my left.

I must be back at Fren’s hideout. I think dimly. How did I get here? I open my eyes to see my brother’s snarling face.

“You made it, course you did. You alw…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong, since I’m only three chapters into his book, i think its safe to say that what I’m about to tell you is 80% going to change later.

Jycin is a weaver in his village until he is chosen to become a priest, the most hated and feared group in the land. he is given three days to say goodbye to his two year old daughter and get…[Read more]

@dekreel @catwing  *sits back in chair, chuckling*  You guys…

@rochellaine I like it!  Although its kind of in between serious and comical at the same time.  Thanks for sharing!

@alia I like Jycin just from your descriptions. Can you tell me a bit about him, or are there spoilers?

Every time you people hijack a thread, I freak out because on the Aetherlght forums, off-topic posts are either moved to Random Anything or deleted. Spamming is a federal offense.

@daeus Thank you. I knew a bit of  that, but I wasn’t sure. As some of you people know, I didn’t do the best job on Nikko….so I was a bit wary.

@jenwriter17 Thank you!

@alia It took a few pages for one of mine threads to hijacked. But I got a GIF war so it’s all good. 😀
You are welcome. Felines have been trying to tell people for years, but they just scolded us. Though sometimes they would pamper us. But we have not forgotten our mission!
Prove that one of ancestors (who’s name is long lost) discovered…[Read more]