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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Actually, Joshua saves the goat although he really gets beat up in the process. Â He knows how much the goat means to the blind boy, because it helps him go places like a seeing eye dog.
This story is set in A.D. 31-33 and has the death, resurrection, and accession of Jesus in it. Â Is that what you mean?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Oh good!  And I like B-bot. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…
Joshua’s fists clenched. Â The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet. Â His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd. Â The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Nice! Â Does Chara go to the hospital???
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Â Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys!  I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Â Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Â Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. Â My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. Â I enj…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira started the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Okay, so I have this scene I need some help with. Â My MC is an eighteen year old guy who is returning home after not being able to see his family for two years. Â His family has thought him dead for over a year. Â What would these peoples responses be when he shows up one night: his Father, his Mother, his ten year old brother, and the elderly se…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia @jenwriter17 @rochellaine I really wish I could be on more, but life won’t allow that yet.  Just thought I’d say it is something to celebrate that poor Uncle Bill has been found! 🙂
Please, though, don’t hesitate to tag me. Â I will be on as often as I can!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Am praying for you!
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Skredder replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you know how to rob any small to medium bank with little to no risk and yet have no intention on actually robbing said banks.
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Skredder replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Of course. I’m praying!
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Alia replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
So, I’m not sure if anyone here is familiar with Word of Life Bible Institute, but its a one to two year bible collage that has campuses around the world.
I’m hoping that I will be able to go to a one year version the year after I graduate high school (in 2 years), but it is pricey and doesn’t offer scholarships. I have basically this summer,…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, I’m actually signing off. I’m finishing up my speech and then going to bed.
I might be on tomorrow though
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, sounds good. that’ll give me time to work on my speech some
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, would you like to do another word war?
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, no I haven’t
@jenwriter17, farewell
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
…181. This is an all time low for me
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Skredder replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 I just requested access. I may not be able to get to it until Thursday or Friday, though.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine…at least tell me you torture your characters. because that can excuse only one death, as long as the unlucky chosen one is a semi main character or at least a favorite.
@jenwriter17, okay, I’m starting too
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