Jessi Rae

@rochellaine @seekjustice Just thinking, on this conversation about hungry after not eating and things, after about 3-7 days the body adjusts to not eating and starts burning fat instead. This would leave a person lethargic and very susceptible to illness, but after their body reaches this point it doesn’t tend to feel hunger. (No clue if that is…[Read more]

@rochellaine Haha, I won’t let Connor die. He’s too precious. *Wraps up in blankets*

@rochellaine @seekjustice Ack sorry! The internet crashed, but I’m back now.

Oooooh, nice snippet!

Yes, I write in 1st person present tense, but I’ve also done 1st person past and 3rd person past. I find it easier to write this way actually, it makes me feel more connected, and then I could just make them drop dead at any given point. xP But I…[Read more]

@rochellaine Oh well! As long as you’re still enjoying the writing. And often it is hard to get back into something after a longish break. *nodnod*

My characters… are kinda in shock? Well, Connor is. And he is aware of it and trying to ignore everything and agh. *pats him*

Laura failed, and now it is left to me.

The door opens at the slight…

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@rochellaine Wellllll, I’ve finished all I technically need to for Camp NaNo, but I’m only about a third of the way through. *flops* My main worry is that this book seems to be looking like it will be reaching the 150k mark before edits.

How about you?

@rochellaine Heyo! I am back and yeah. Writing sounds like a plan!

I’m going to the Teach Them Diligently in Ohio here.

@seekjustice, WELCOME BACK! *disappears to go back to schoolwork*

@jenwriter17, I would, but there is this mean thing called schoolwork that is keeping me away

Here is a question.  How can I make my first chapter grab the reader, but also make it relate to the story and make my reader care about my MC?

@jenwriter17 Good idea!  Yes, tag more people please!

@daughteroftheking @alia Thanks!

Yep, I do. I just started it not too long ago.

https://thelionspen636003113.wordpress.com/

@skredder He had really good relationships with his family before he was taken away.  Good point!

@ariel-ashira I do think it depends on the relationships the he had with his family before he left.

@daughteroftheking, I definitely think ‘where is the chocolate?’ is the correct question

@epicaddie2, I would agree with question two of the above. I’m always double guessing myself on whether my characters are relatable

@filewriterbase13x The reference is Piglet from Winnie the Pooh. 🙂

@alia Thanks!

@rochellaine Ack, have to go.

@rochellaine Alright. You?

@alia G’night!