Kingdom Pen | J.A. Penrose | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/jess-penrose/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning J.A. Penrose. Fri, 01 May 2026 05:30:57 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 1e1549ca5953ba9e06868f4be8f8231b Catwing posted an update: Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/82681/ Thu, 19 Jul 2018 03:01:06 -0400 Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I think I have editing figured out now. Cutting down the POVs to just Alex, Chase, and Cele. Finally letting go of the VR beginning that I was stubbornly clinging to. If you realised something about the whole VR please tell me cuz in my mind it only foreshadows book two and I don’t want to…[Read more]

]]> 5 983dc5a64025ade60bc6bdbb2c15f3e0 Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-17/page/7/#post-72897 Sun, 20 May 2018 00:20:24 -0400 @jess-penrose you said you were going to send me some things in passive voice?
@alia Yay for your friend!
@daughteroftheking AND OUR KEYBOARDS ARE DUSTY AND COVERED IN SPILLED DRINKS BECAUSE WE CAN BARELY SEE AND HAVE TO LEAN TOWARD THE SCREEN TO SEE WHAT WE ARE WRITING!!! AND WE HAVE GONE CRAZY OVER MISSSPELLED WORDS AND HOW THEY CHANGED THE…[Read more]

]]> c16e349414f70cf0bddc67bd86862849 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/page/19/#post-71853 Tue, 01 May 2018 07:54:53 -0400 @jess-penrose

Unfortunately I have to disappear now πŸ™‚ good luck with your writing!

]]> 98e16dafa2f7f1b50add01e1bdc614fe SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/page/19/#post-71851 Tue, 01 May 2018 06:01:59 -0400 @rochellaine @jess-penrose

Either of you on?

]]> e75288fd916bde6e5b93463ed8626f80 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/page/5/#post-71545 Wed, 25 Apr 2018 03:59:07 -0400 @rochellaine @jess-penrose

Are either of you around for a writing session/word war?

]]> 2598a00ea612aa8999235f0849e8bfff Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/page/3/#post-71497 Tue, 24 Apr 2018 06:11:10 -0400 @seekjustice @jess-penrose Do either of you want to have a quick word war before I go to bed?Β  I’ve got to get a little more written tonight! πŸ˜‰

]]> 825324a8106003abda0c0367659f8a15 Jenna Terese started the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/ Sun, 22 Apr 2018 02:10:08 -0400 Guys, we go through these way too fast πŸ˜› It’s awesome.

Writers’ Corner #16!

@seekjustice @ariel-ashira @filewriterbase13x @jane-maree @jess-penrose @alia @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @dekreel

Rochellaine, thank you for your sympathy for Rin, though she would’ve probably wanted the chocolate πŸ˜›

hmm, I ‘m not sure how to convince someone to…[Read more]

]]> bb61aca62be3cbfc00204cbfe7e6a974 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/63/#post-71265 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 07:53:17 -0400 @seekjustice Why don’t you come visit us in America?Β  It’d be fun! πŸ˜€ (Have you ever traveled out of the country?Β  I have, once.)

Yeah, your characters are so mixed up. πŸ˜›

@jess-penrose Thank you!Β  She’s hungry, so a pizza will be helpful.Β  Character arcs,Β yes! πŸ˜€

Sorry, but I’m going to go to bed now.Β  It’s really late! πŸ˜‰Β  I’m going to be up…[Read more]

]]> cf2d060983a58bebfb2c4471b486be00 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/63/#post-71260 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 07:19:18 -0400 @seekjustice Oh yes!Β  Now I remember I was laughing with my sister the other day over the fact that Quillon says “Gracious goodness, it hurts!” when he gets shot.Β  We were laughing because that’s my sister’s particular exclamation, and I always tell her she says it backwards, since most people say “goodness gracious.”Β  So I do remember from the la…[Read more]

]]> 9e1d75b275326e9aa50d964e91600ace Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/62/#post-71257 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 07:01:15 -0400 @jess-penrose

Research on these topics has been ethical

Haha.Β  Disclaimers are always necessary, aren’t they? πŸ˜›

Okay, thanks.Β  That’s good to know.Β  But now I have a dilemma.Β  Can I convince myself that it’s really okay if one of my characters is starved, or will I be too softhearted?Β  That’s nearly as bad as killing them!

@seekjustice Afte…[Read more]

]]> 76be7ff9a883b6741caea1b872f799fd Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/62/#post-71253 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 06:42:52 -0400 @seekjusticeΒ Ohh, it’s going so slowly! πŸ™Β  I think perhaps soon, but I’m not sure yet.

Well, I was thinking it would be cool if sometime inΒ Stars Justice got really frustrated with Kendall and told him something like “You’re just as bad as my cousin!” πŸ˜€Β  Or if he accidentally made the connection in the sequel and realizes that Zac might tur…[Read more]

]]> 07d928506bff3708bab748789dcfe694 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/62/#post-71252 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 06:35:42 -0400 @jess-penrose

*tucks information away for a time that shall come* I’ve never tortured my characters by food deprivation. Could be interesting. Quillon would not cope.

 

]]> 8e3dcc04ef3946282b2f52419cfb8b19 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71242 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 05:46:08 -0400 @jess-penrose Oh, that happens to me far too often. πŸ™Β  Glad you’re back!Β  AndΒ very glad you aren’t planning on letting Connor “drop dead.”Β  That would be awful.Β  I have enough to deal with trying to keep emotionally stable when reading SeekJustice’s book and I really don’t need to hear of any more characters dying. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

@seekjustice Haha…[Read more]

]]> 2ad44f26b01570aae39b3633112d53a6 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71238 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 05:23:26 -0400 @rochellaine @jess-penrose

Hey, I’m back here now!

@jenwriter17

Thanks, it went really well and all the old people really loved it πŸ˜€ I do Scottish Highland dancing (Sword dancing, you know πŸ™‚ ) I love writing at the library. It’s so quiet with no siblings πŸ˜€

]]> 77c5c53624a8fb3d657607bc7a8f93a7 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71237 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 05:06:38 -0400 @jess-penrose Oh, poor, poor Connor! πŸ™Β  My MC just had a panic attack and passed out.Β  Now she’s better, thankfully.

Here’s a clip from a while back right before she passes out:

As she looked out at the road all she could think of was Hot.Β  It was so hot.Β  Suddenly her mind flashed as though she was back on the road, stumbling, gasping, hop…

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]]> 69fa40040081079101dc1f3032873018 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71235 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 04:28:30 -0400 @jess-penrose Oh, whoops! haha. πŸ˜€

Well, I’m having the opposite problem that you have! πŸ™‚Β  I’m a very slow writer, possibly because I took off two years in which I did basically no writing and only started up again a few months ago, so it’s taking me a while to get back in the swing.Β  So I set a low goal for Camp NaNo, but I’m still behind a l…[Read more]

]]> 31620fed21c3d12ee72a3bceb0bfc372 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71233 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 04:12:19 -0400 @jess-penrose Hello!Β  How’s your book coming?

]]> 06645f22d86e3abea123d3f7e2728ce3 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/61/#post-71231 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 03:37:49 -0400 @seekjustice I’m back now.Β  You’re probably not done yet, but I’m tagging you anyway in case. πŸ˜‰

@jess-penrose Are you writing now?

]]> 50bf419ac36e98c269f4bc328b1a5ab9 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/60/#post-71217 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 23:32:37 -0400 tagging also @jane-maree @skredder @jess-penrose

]]> 1610d8603769a4e6f197cbedb5ccb04b Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/60/#post-71197 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 04:29:26 -0400 @jess-penrose Not so great. πŸ™Β  But right now I’m taking a break to look at Alia’s speech for her.Β  Maybe when I get back to writing after that it’ll go better.

]]> 6b9aa8ccdb23a055deb6efcd9318fc9b Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/60/#post-71195 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 04:20:19 -0400 @alia Goodnight!

@jess-penrose How’s it going?

]]> 33fdb019f59bba4fe4e4403d313adbe4 Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/59/#post-71193 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 04:12:00 -0400 @rochellaine, @jess-penrose, I’m signing off, gotta go to bed. I was told that 10 is too late to be up writing

]]> 49c4d5f1df4a11920b2d12122aec52da Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/59/#post-71184 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:52:29 -0400 @alia @jess-penrose Hello!Β  I’m back.

]]> 2f4fb45239b91c21bec1fb1fd95dd75a Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/59/#post-71183 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:51:42 -0400 @jess-penrose, only 176. Tonight is a bit slow for me it seems. But I did get my characters to safety so there is that

]]> 8727c85aac2f06fe5d25860fe1fcc4e7 Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/59/#post-71181 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:39:59 -0400 @jess-penrose, sounds good

]]> d1fbe774fe5aaca3fb1918af3e2b247a Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/58/#post-71179 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:36:48 -0400 @jess-penrose, would you like to word war for 10 minutes?

]]> 2f84a399d1d3f3e481c9994cbb2d7e45 Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/58/#post-71177 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:34:16 -0400 @jess-penrose, I’m working on getting to chapter 6 of Decisions while at the same time trying to finish a speech on the American Civil War

]]> 8b8321a30a6b7e167c5c3758cc618557 Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/58/#post-71175 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 03:27:41 -0400 @jess-penrose, what are you working on?

@rochellaine, see you soon

]]> 7a9ef9a7dc442e595883849dc8357e3c Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/58/#post-71166 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 02:41:17 -0400 @alia Are you back yet?Β  I am at a slow point in my writing and need some encouragement to keep going.

Anyone else writing? @skredder @jess-penrose @ariel-ashira

]]> 8a22a00141037294c57b80fed7dd1137 Alia posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/78096/#acomment-78108 Tue, 17 Apr 2018 01:20:13 -0400 @jess-penrose, I honestly have no clue. though it does clear up some questions I was having as to whether or not anyone was getting my replies…drat.
I will try to get the reply to you

In reply to - Alia posted an update @jess-penrose, I’ve been meaning to ask, did you ever get my reply to your email from my blog? ]]> 5140f516464bf4e06092973ca89a3f91 Alia posted an update: @jess-penrose, I've been meaning to ask, did you ever get my […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/78096/ Tue, 17 Apr 2018 00:42:43 -0400 @jess-penrose, I’ve been meaning to ask, did you ever get my reply to your email from my blog?

]]> 3 46603f52cea4b9ee88cf70c50b2a14c5 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/considering-songwriting/#post-70940 Mon, 16 Apr 2018 16:41:13 -0400 @daeus @jess-penrose thank youuuu! πŸ˜€ I’m keeping all your guys’ tips in mind

@kaya-young thanks! <3

]]> 5793043b12ebb97d7fae3b1576c72bc4 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/45/#post-70924 Mon, 16 Apr 2018 02:25:24 -0400 Hey, anyone around. I’m writing ;D @jess-penrose @jane-maree @anyone

@rochellaine I know it’s Sunday for you, but maybe you’re around for discussions?

]]> 67a962326e9f8a255e32166036a853e7 Sam Kowal replied to the topic Considering Songwriting in the forum Music http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/considering-songwriting/#post-70922 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 23:45:13 -0400 @jenwriter17

I have to admit, if you’ve watched a lot of those videos you probably know more than me, at this point.

I’d say…

1) Come up with a song idea (What you want your song to be about)

2) Think about the possibilities of that idea, or a question about it

3)Write your ideas down in verses and a chorus

4) Make a melody for it

You can…[Read more]

]]> a4ba16779d73a2b7095c6e92c2957cef SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/41/#post-70804 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:01:55 -0400 @rochellaine @skredder @catwing @jess-penrose

Anyone around? I think I’m in need of a word warring partner πŸ˜€

]]> b356677e3c25d334c43227f60d1bbd98 Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70758 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 18:37:07 -0400 I’ll be here in probably a little over an hour.Β  Will anyone be on then?

@jenwriter17 @skredder @seekjustice @jess-penrose @sam-kowal @alia @ariel-ashira

]]> 6c615321cf199e19a3896da0d39325f3 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70732 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:48:04 -0400 Bye, @jess-penrose Unfortunately, I also have to go. πŸ™ Bye. This was fun and the first time I have ever done it. I bid you both a good night. *waves and bows*

]]> b7941f6dd78116f2c68416aa19578a07 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70731 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:44:29 -0400 @jess-penrose, @skredder. Oh, okay. I get it know. Cool! I just finished Part three. As you probably already know, Skredder. Penrose, If you want to read what I just wrote, it’s on the topic, Truly lost our minds. πŸ™‚

]]> f1ed96c6dfd0b470bb8e15a32bd46e69 Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70730 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:42:12 -0400 @jess-penrose Okay, so this short story is actually based on a novel (or series) I want to write. It starts out in modern times with all electricity in the world going out. Literally, anything that runs on electricity shut down at one time around the globe. The story takes place over 200 years as society tries to reinvent itself, taking a…[Read more]

]]> 32e990fdb415a59c83eef838f3ab0eef Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70722 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:17:59 -0400 @jess-penrose Do you have any tips for me? Anything you especially love to see or that sticks out as steampunk to you in stories?

]]> af7972f909ed0c51ff84c384ec0c9bcc Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70718 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:02:30 -0400 @jess-penrose @filewriterbase13x Way to go, guys! πŸ˜€

]]> 5fdb6acc7fb4abba3b61f4a5497988d6 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70716 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:55:46 -0400 @jess-penrose, Yay! Good Job! I am almost done with part three!

]]> f1a9485e6069877062d37b80bd7088df filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70714 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:26:18 -0400 @jess-penrose, Lucky! Go turn off those horses! LOL

]]> d99316b64d5bfc932debcca4df6eb063 Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70713 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:21:51 -0400 @jess-penrose When I first read that I thought you said “turn off some horses.” I had to do a double take after that. How do you turn off horses? πŸ˜‰

]]> 9d942b77d7a11281277cea4cf72ac7d3 Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70705 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:03:55 -0400 @jess-penrose Oh wow! That sounds cool! πŸ™‚

@filewriterbase13x Nice! Motivation can be hard to come by. πŸ™‚

]]> b3661cfe3ec847d60d2dd9c0d743346d Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70704 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:02:26 -0400 @jess-penrose πŸ™‚ Okay. Β Thats what I figured.

@filewriterbase13x No problem! Β I get the whole family rules thing!

@skredder I am working on “The Crimson Cup”.

]]> 682651b2d8d7f1c78dc028c7ce01561a filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70700 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:56:30 -0400 @ariel-ashira, and @skredder. I wish I could tell you where I am, but I’m not allowed to give out that info. No offense to you of course, just family rules.

@jess-penrose. *smug expression crosses face* That’s good. Good to know. You would probably think I was pretty boring anyways. Haha. Well, maybe.

]]> 9a70e0a57c3e3984cf12892a3d5238ef Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70699 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:54:35 -0400 @filewriterbase13x @ariel-ashira @jess-penrose What are y’all working on?

]]> d50e432e20feea5b3e549677071ff3fa Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70697 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:47:25 -0400 @jess-penrose What does it mean to be an aussie?

]]> 4e523d7aa5bac4fa4e86b96cdf0d89ac Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70695 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:44:54 -0400 @jess-penrose I am in Missouri. Β Its 6:44 right now. Β @skredder Where are you at?

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