J.A. Penrose

@salome01w4g alrighty! Sleep well, girl. *waves*

@Catwing sounds like fun!! I’m halfway through chapter 37 (of Hope Ann’s novel Fidelyon) and it’s pretty good. *nodnod*

@Catwing @Salome01w4g I am here to join you! I’ll be critiquing/editing.

@catwing Oh dear. It ate him…

I’ve got to go now. I edited quite a bit. 😀

@catwing Maybe to Jack it would appear that the flashlight appeared out of nowhere? Like, he can’t see the fairy yet, because he doesn’t know they exist. He doesn’t believe in them yet?

@catwing Gotta love the humor! 😛

Hey catwing, go outline. 😉

Suddenly, a flashlight appeared out of nowhere. Jack put his hand on his head, clenching at his hair! “Goodness me! A flashlight! My requests have been answered!”

@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!

I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀

I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]

@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!

@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀

@that_writer_Girl_99 That sounds…difficult. 😉

@that_writer_Girl_99 *pats shoulder*

What’s ethics?

@That_writer_Girl_99 Watcha studying?
@salome01w4g Hiya! I’m worldbuilding.

@ingridrd Those are actually pretty good. 🙂 Much better than I can do.

That’s awesome, @catwing! 🙂

@That-writer-girl-99 Hey, you still there?

@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
I’m worldbuilding at the moment.

@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.

@raevynstar Hey! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately life is busy right now. 🙁 I’m really sorry!

Rogue One is awesome too.

Guys. Just. Guys.

The never-ending discussion.

Kylo Ren is awesome.

@daeus Looks good. *thumbs up*