Jenna Terese

@seekjustice Sure, provided it’s not too long of one. Too long and I start to daydream badly. 🙂

@jenwriter17

Whoops *laughs carelessly* I accidentally killed Justice AND Jen. My bad.

😛 He’s still alive at the end of the outline, so there’s a 95% chance he’ll still be alive at the end of this book.

@seekjustice @skredder I’m leaving for about fifteen minutes.  Hopefully you’ll be here when I get back! 😉  Goodbye for now.

@rochellaine Within reason of course! *looks nervous*

@skredder Hello!

Would you two like to participate in a word war, since I arrived too late for the last one?

Hallu! I be here, doin’ some word sprints. 🙂

@catwing @jenwriter17 Oh, wow.  I had no idea I was so good at this!  I thought you guys would beat me by a lot! 🙂  I feel very happy with myself right now. 😛

*accepts chocolate wreath with pleasure* Thank you for this great honor. 😉

@jenwriter17 @catwing I’ve got 478 words. 🙂

@seekjustice Any fanfiction?!  Wow, thanks! 😀 😛

@alia https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/stars-fill-infinity/

Sorry I missed your post. If you’d like to you can read it. The links to the Google doc (which is in three parts, because it’s a fairly large book) can be found HERE (you might have to scroll down the topic a bit).

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 I sanction any fanfiction that you desire to write 😀

@jenwriter17 @catwing Don’t you girls dare to have a word war without me!!! 😀

Fifteen minutes by the timer?

@rochellaine

Well, I never thought of window scenes being romantic, but there you go. *scribbles in notebook give Justice and Chessy more window scenes*

@jenwriter17

I did, however, consider giving Chessy another love interest. I had considered Quillon, since she’d almost fallen in love with Quillon in the first book, till I paired him with Sa…[Read more]

@catwing, I’m actually leaving, otherwise I would have loved to do one

@rochellaine

Yeah I think I might do that. Thanks!

@juliawrites4christ Welcome!! *bows and sweeps cape dramatically* I love historical fiction. What’s your favorite part of writing?

@mnvalentine

I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.

Just some thoughts…

#1: The article in the…[Read more]

@rochellaine, okay. I thought maybe she had posted a portion in one of the forums. but that makes sense

@jenwriter17 Thank you so much!!  I’ll need them.  I’m not going to do it right now, though.  My little sister is singing “You Are My Sunshine” and “Eensy Weensy Spider” a few feet away from me, so I don’t think I’d better start crying and sniffling… 😀

So right now I will try to get my word count for Camp NaNoWriMo in on my western, and ma…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Okay I might do it!  But then…help!  I’ll have to reread the whole third part!  How will I survive? 🙁

@seekjustice Just give them a few more window scenes and I might fall for them. 😉  I don’t care what happens, whether the conversation is completely boring, whether they argue, whether they kiss – I just love the fact that they’re talking through the open window!!!  Since it seems like Justice is accustomed to coming to Chessy’s window when he w…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Well, the first one I came up with was Chestice. 😀  What do you think of that? And can you come up with any more ideas?

I may not ship Chessy and Justice, but I did ship Quillon and Sapphire!  Hey, what would you think of some Rain/Kendall fanfiction based on the conversation between Chessy and Rain about their crushes on Justice a…[Read more]

@jenwriter17, it has been very interesting and eye opening

@rochellaine, where can I read @seekjustice ‘s book???