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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Gothic-ish Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 1 month ago
Hmm, @devastate-lasting My guess is probably Supernatural Suspense/Mystery. Maaaybe fantasy, but definitely supernatural!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Gothic-ish Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 1 month ago
@devastate-lasting Of course!!! Keep up the fantastic work!!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Gothic-ish Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 1 month ago
GIRLLL it was AMAZING!!! I loved it sooo muchhh!!!! I never once saw that plottwist coming!!! And it was SOOOO creative!!! Great job!!!! And the foreeeshadowinnngggg. AND THAT END LINE???? Brilliant XD
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Daisy Torres posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
Smoke and Mirrors Chapter Eight is out! This one is really long, so don’t worry about rushing. Also, if anyone needs a link to the last chapter, just ask! Thank y’all <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I_9csu83PSKoPHo0IyruTjk_AXwgV52yIMzNFwpiRKE/edit?usp=drivesdk
@abigail-m @issawriter7 @writerlexi1216 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nanisnook @n…[Read more] -
Daisy Torres replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@issawriter7 Ohhh this sounds coolll!!! I love retellings. I’ll gladly read!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic KP Writers’ Collective (please read) ✌️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms This is an amazinggg idea!!! I try to avoid putting my face out on the internet though, so I probably won’t be doing this, but thank you so much for thinking of me!! I wish you guys all the best!!! <3
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Daisy Torres posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
Chapter 7 is here!! @abigail-m @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nanisnook @nova21 @writerlexi1216 It’s a bit long, so don’t worry about getting to it quickly or anything <3 Have a blessed week!
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Wow that’s great!! I’ve been looking forward to it since the last one. I really like how you described the fire dress. I was able to see it.
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@nanisnook Thank you so much!! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I thought I had haha.
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Awesome! I can’t wait to read it:D
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@abigail-mYay!! Thank you!
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I just finished reading chapter seven! And it was so good!! I love the way that the rising action and the whole time have about a million questions about what is going to happen next:)
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@abigail-m Thank you so much!! Quick question though, because I never saw a comment or anything, did you read 6? I don’t think I taggged you on that one haha. If you didn’t that’s fine, no rush, but there may be a few things that don’t make sense XD
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No, I didn’t get to read six yet, (I thought perhaps I mixed something up with my docs), but I’d love to read it!! 😀
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@abigail-m Haha sure thing!! Here you go!!.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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@gracie-j No problem!! Thank you!! Do you want the link to 6?
AHH thank youuu so much!!! You have no idea how much that means to me!!! <33
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 1 month ago
@abigail-m Heyy, no problem!! I am really happy that you did!!
Thank youuu!!! That makes me sooo happy to hear!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 1 month ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Yess, same XD np!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 1 month ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms You’re honestly spot-on tho XD The ones I don’t care for as much go through waaay less trauma and heartache than the ones I absolutely adore. Weird how that worksssss XD
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 1 month ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms uuuhh ohhh XD That’s never a good thing for the Charries XD
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Daisy Torres's profile was updated 5 years, 2 months ago
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic The Ballad of Private Poe in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi, @rochellaine! I just wanted to say that this is sooo good!!! It has a similar style to some of Rudyard Kipling’s poems (which are very good!), and I can totally see it being a seller!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms OOohh that’s a GREAT idea!!! And btw, I LOVE the name Kodia!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Absolutely!!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m oh my word thank youuu!! That literally means so much to me!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@Abigail-m Thank you!! But look at you though 🤩
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j AWW thank youuu!!! You’re too sweet!!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
Remember me softly, on a noisy, hard day.
I remember the words you spoke, before you went away.
We waited at the window, watching for you.
But when word came that you’d run, our sorrow just grew.
Remember me softly, on a noisy, hard day.
I remember you softly, but no longer without edge.
And at night, I can still see your horse, riding into…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms AWWWWW MA HARTTT I LOVE THATT!!! That is sooooooo PRETTYYYY oh my wordddd
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YESS!!!! Do you have the link to the last couple of chapters? I think I might can find them if I scroll down, but I don’t think I’ve not gotten to the ones you’ve shared here. If not, that’s okay!! THANKS!!! Can’t wait to read this!!! <33
Sure thing, girl!! Which chapter were you on?
Actually, I just realized I’m pretty far back, but I’ll probably catch up soon. I just don’t know if I can find the ones you shared as an activity and not a forum. Does that make sens? (Also, I’m soo sorry how long it took me to get back. I had a crazy weekend and am just catching up!)
@issawriter7 Hey, no problem girl!! Honestly same XD I’ll resend you the links!!
1-5 is on the forum, then here’s:
6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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7: https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
@issawriter7 aaand 8: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I_9csu83PSKoPHo0IyruTjk_AXwgV52yIMzNFwpiRKE/edit?usp=drivesdk
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333 I can't wait to read these next chapters!!!!!!
@issawriter7 Awww RIGHT BACK AT YOU!!! I loveee your comments!!! You’re always so encouraging and sweet!!!
Awesome! I can’t wait to read it:D
@gracie-j Yayyy!!! That makes me so happy XD (Well I hope you like it then!!) Honestly, I never have any idea on lengths when I begin XD I still have some decisions in the plot I have to make, and that will either shorten it or lengthen it, so idk yet XD I do want to publish it though! If I had to guess, at this point, I’d say probably 30 or so.…[Read more]
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7–https://docs.google.com/document/d/19tJAUfX9x93_7N71kBvKKLwCLmUeMY7E3Rf4Yuu-Vyg/edit?usp=drivesdk
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nXK3f5b1lWz24Q0fNNjLLlygajuFq230fxN5XjoKEYc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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I just finished it! I love the way the plot is developing and I’m so interested in these characters 😀
@abigail-m Thank you so much!!! I’m SOO glad to hear thattt!!!