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Felicity replied to the topic Were You in Crazy Writing Week 2023? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Cool! Yay! A fellow Penguin! One thing about that week I really loved was finding a group of young girls who were friends and writers, about the same age as I was when I started writing with my friends. It was cool to kinda come back to my youth. And also speak in as an “older sister” in the way I wished I had a mentor or som…
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Felicity replied to the topic Were You in Crazy Writing Week 2023? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I participated in CWW this year and it was a lot of fun, as well as challenging. I would say my goals are coming along slowly, but I am making progress, which is what counts. What about you?
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Starshiness replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Now for the board! I’ve never actually made one of these so idk how good it is 🫣
Oh and some tags
@freedomwriter76 @esther-c @awsumfaith @janellebelovedpig @acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @landric @anyone-else
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Starshiness replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
@janellebelovedpig Yesss!! Genre sisters 🤗😂 weeeelllll “Raven’s Quest” is an allegorical novel centering around a young woman named Raven. Upon learning that her grandmother, her guardian since her parents died, has contracted a seemingly incurable disease, Raven is desperate to do something. She is given a small seed of hope when she hears news…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@janellebelovedpig I’m late to the party but aww what a beautiful story!! The names of the characters and the whole setting/theme are reminding me of the book Hind’s Feet on High Places, which I love! The tone of your writing also matches the storyline perfectly. Cant wait to see the next bit!!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I love this!!! 🙂
I agree with @felicity. The descriptions made it seem so real, without losing the style of writing. Well done! 😃
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Felicity replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I like this! The description of the Sanctuary is beautiful. Keep up the good work!
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Then at the same time my heart aches for all the unsaved friends that I have who have no interest in Christ at all and I’m thinking Lord wait maybe with time I can plant enough seeds and you’ll change they’re stony hearts.
Yes, it is a balance between wanting Jesus to return and also wanting Him to wait so the unsaved can repent. I am sp…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Amen! Those two verses pretty well sum it up. Lately I feel both overwhelmed with a call for home and to stay here as long as I can to reach as many as I can with Christ’s light.
Yess. I’ve gotten myself into the indie Christian author corner via KP and then on to other similar things and I think I’ll have endless reads there…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy Easter, everyone!!! 🐰🐣✝️🌷
Praise the Lord our Savior is alive!!! 🥳 He rose from the grave, for death could not hold Him down. Hallelujah!! ✨
Hope you all have a blessed Easter! 🥰🥰
“And he said to them, “Do not be alarmed. You seek Jesus of Nazareth, who was crucified. He has risen; he is not here. See the place where they laid him…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Great poem! I love how you based it off of Psalm 19! I think everyone else gave some good suggestions for punctuation, so I won’t say much, except, keep up the good work! 😉
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks! I really like this part of yours!
Up and through and by and with
In dark storms or peaceful bliss
Down and out and up and in
He’s trustworthy; don’t forget.
Love your poem For My Sake. I could tell by the first line that it was about a sister!! 😉 I have four sisters and this line is so true: Because I…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @janellebelovedpig
…so I’m hoping it’s okay for me to jump in, but if not feel free to ignore this…
also please excuse my terrible usage of telling too much and the poor formatting and horrible transitions XDFor a while she was silent. Then with a huff…
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
Sorry, I messed up everyone’s names 🙂
I really like “In too deep” but we can think of more if you want 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin
I really dont know how it should go yet 😀 But heres the whole story together. It might help anyone create another piece 🙂 What should we call it? Or should we wait till its finished. We can start thinking of names now!
One bright sunny day, I watched a gir…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12
Heheh I think I gave a rough cliffhanger there. 😅🤣
Any ideas for the next part of the story?
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Esther replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin
Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 8 months ago
@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!
@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone
Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.
Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c
Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:
The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”
I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]
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