Janellebelovedpig

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

Haha! I’ve had others complai…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh I thought it was funny. No worries!

@whalekeeper   @loopylin

wHaT!??

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Funny thing, Whaley, I couldn’t make head or tale of YOU for forever!! Still not sure if i have.  XD

@keilah-h

Oh Cricky!

I never knew you wanted to whack me!

lolololol

@koshka

Exactly.

Y’all on here are the only friends I’ve got who don’t think I’m weird or crazy.

@keilah-h

Yup! You are spot on!

@linus-smallprint

I just got way too much satisfaction out of that response.

@loopylin

Haha! SAME!!! I listened to the first two and read the rest!

Did you get the multi voice reading?

@keilah-h

Because the government outlawed marriage and she was married……………

@linus-smallprint

just joking. I just couldn’t resist.

It’s me. It’s the Elvish translation of my name.

@linus-smallprint

No!

I have no idea who that is!

@linus-smallprint

I just requested access. I’m using an alias but it’s me.

@koshka

aw, thank you!!!

@hybridlore

Well…. I was working on a project I need to get done….. but I’ve never been one to resist puppydog eyes.

@koshka

Okay, that makes sense.

@linus-smallprint

I almost said Eustace but I LOVE him in The Last Battle and I don’t love Eric at the moment……

@linus-smallprint

Lolol. Well, Bernd isn’t a super major character… so I guess you can get his name wrong.

Leon and Julian might not necessarily take the correct option first as well. It might be interesting to see some consequences for hiding their beliefs and how they have to deal with that.

Well…… they have had twelve or so years…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

lololol.