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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know what’s worse!! Watching people you love brutally murdered for the pleasure of a bloodthirsty crowd, or being completely abused and brainwashed. Or…. yeah, there’s a lot.
I guess I’ll go with the second.
Joe was ripped away from his family by the government when he was 12 years old. He was marked for government…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Whaoh! Don’t be a Scrooge!!
Please say you really do like Christmas.
Otherwise you might have a frightening night in the near future.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
I love themmm!! 😍
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness. That’s adorable.
snowball x10
*gasp* how could you!
@liberty (because you’ll probably want to read this. 😉 )
“How’s my favorite patent today?”
Liam looked up as Werner peeked around the door. “Doing well,” he replied, a smile touching his pale face.
Werner stepped in and softly closed the door behind him. “I’m glad…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Soooo coooool!
Okay, what sort of character is he? That will really help with the quotes. Like, what sort or quotes would fit him, ya know?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Pouts.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
No prob. You’re good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
You’re good.
I understand the feeling. The Holocaust was a very dark, dark time. Researching about it can be pretty tough. Hans is the Villain of Freedom’s book.
He’s an SS.
But yeah, none of us on here hate Jews!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I personally like Baron and am totally tracking his every move! Leon is very militaristic, and he sees Baron as someone who should not be involved in a fighting team when he’s pretty emotionally on the edge. He’s someone who could compromise their safety should he go off the deep end.
You know what I mean?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
I want to be friends, I just really don’t have time for this right now!
I’m sorry!
I’ll keep this window open and see if I have time for it later on. I just have a lot going on with school, holidays, etc.
I’m sorry if it feels like I’m always going after you. I don’t feel like I’m “going after you” anymore then I do to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, now it’s a challenge. Post what you wrote, and I can almost certainly top it.
Ganging up on me are you?
Josef shook his head, bitter tears stinging his eyes. “Why Lord? Why is this happening to us? Will you really leave Rosemarie a widow? Will you leave Ernst and Marta fatherless? Oh Lord, t…
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The rules are on the first page! <3 :))
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Prayers for my brother please! In the course of two basketball games he’s jammed two fingers and twisted an ankle (he still can’t put a lot of pressure on it). Pray that he heals quickly and doesn’t have to sit out of the games for too long!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, I sent you an email. Did you get it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
LOVE IT!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Hey Kefa, I’m sorry if this offends you, but I wanted to let you know that we don’t use language like that on KP, even if you don’t spell it out all the way, the implication isn’t good.
I hope you understand.
Also, I’m glad to see you back and I’ve been enjoying your story!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I know what it feels like to watched a beloved side character die. *sob*
Also, I know who your said character is………..
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Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝