Janellebelovedpig

@thearcaneaxiom

If reality is simply the state of existing, what specifically is existing? Is it everything within the universe? Is it everything that is self aware? If man is uniquely created in the image of God, does that not mean that God takes the image of a man, and therefore is distinguished from reality? Is that even meaningful to ask, are…

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@kyronthearcanin

Some parts in chapter two were a bit confusing to me, like the back and forth with the doctors and going to different rooms. And it seemed strange to me that Kirah would tell Keith about what had happened when Jade had told her to keep it a secret. It seemed important that they kept it hidden, but Kirah doesn’t seem too concerned…[Read more]

@awsumfaith

Yeah lol. The downside with pantsing is that, while you can get to some insane page counts, there will be some kind of plothole, or absolutely no ending/arcs at all… I’ve done that a lot. 🤣

@awsumfaith

Aww, thanks! I’ll probably post another soon. 🙂

While most of my WIPs end up getting put to the side at least for a little while, this one can’t really do that, because I’m part of a writing group. Basically I have to get a chapter done at least every two weeks, and that’s pushing it. It helps cause they can catch things like small…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks for the heads up about the series! I appreciate it.

@esther-c @janellebelovedpig @keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings  @acancello @all those I’ve forgotten lol

Here’s Brycen’s first POV for Chapter 3:

Brycen ducked under a tent flap, moving swiftly and silently. A black cloak followed behind him, the hood up to hide his face. In his hand was a necklace- expensive, with some kind of…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks so much!!! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂

Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD

@kyronthearcanin

Girl, this is so good!! I love it!! 😄

I would suggest separating the two POVs into separate chapters (so you’d have 4 chapters at this point), but you do whatever you want, because chapter length isn’t the most important thing when drafting. 😉

Looking forward to the next chapters!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@janellebelovedpig

The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!

@thearcaneaxiom

Emotions are definitely interesting. You can’t just think all the time, “how would I feel?” because not all people respond the same way as others. So it definitely requires you getting to know your characters…

Oh, and Mary Sue makes a lot more sense now lol.

I, unfortunately, have yet to read much by Brandon Sanderson. I do…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂

Did someone say pirate?? 👀👀👀👀

*gasp* ARE YOU WRITING A PIRATE STORY??!!

*cough* I suppose I should introduce myself before I begin yelling in ecstasy hehe… Hiii there @awsumfaith (love the tagline btw! not to mention that adorable pfp, Toothless stole my heart a long time ago …😍)! I’m known on here as Starshiness and I’ve just returned to KP…[Read more]

Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣

Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else

Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]

@esther-c

👍!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

idk…I guess I forget about him at times…XD😅 His book is on backburner, I guess that’s why, lol! 😂

Lol, no biggie. 😁 I get that. 😉

Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Aww, I’m glad!!! 🥰😁

Yw! 😀

@kyronthearcanin

Ooooh! I’ll definitely read this when I get the time! 👍 😄

@freedomwriter76

(I totally get that, girl…same for me! XD😅)

XD

Praise the Lord that He still loves us despite our mistakes and that He is always there to help us overcome sin! ❤️❤️