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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@y’all
I’ll make the doc on Monday. Cuz I forgot to yesterday and ya know, today’s Easter. 😁
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Esther started the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Happy Easter, everyone!!! 🐰🐣✝️🌷
Praise the Lord our Savior is alive!!! 🥳 He rose from the grave, for death could not hold Him down. Hallelujah!! ✨
Hope you all have a blessed Easter! 🥰🥰
“And he said to them, “Do not be alarmed. You seek Jesus of Nazareth, who was crucified. He has risen; he is not here. See the place where they laid him…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahh!!!! 😆 Thank you so much!!! 🥰
That means a lot, especially knowing that my prose was spot on, cuz that’s big struggle of mine. 😅😊😄
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃
I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.
Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, don’t worry about it! I honestly wasn’t sure if I was forgetting something. You’re totally fine.
And happy Easter!!! 😃🎉🎉🎉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
No problem!
Yeah, her powers are very limited so far. The idea is that this general time is when all their powers are beginning to really develop. So yeah, that’s just the small part, and shifting reality is the end result, though it takes tons of energy for her to do so. I’ve never read the Reckoners series, but I’ve been…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
Argggh!! I hate that when I’m reading a book, but I used to do it a lot in my own writing. One time it was this random drink that I had made up, and I thought it was sooo neat!!! (it was, if I do say so myself, but the reader could care less.)
Exactly. Exactly. Exactly!!! That happened to me just this morning actually.
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Felicity replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok, makes sense now. 🙂
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
(No I didn’t forget about this, 🙂 I just had a busy week.)
(Yeah! I’d love to continue if we can be respectful about it, I just knew this to be a big point of contention for many.)
(Ok! Though we will differ, and I’m going to state what I believe and why, I will try to be as respectful as possible. You’re right. I can’t speak f…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Felicity replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Great poem! I love how you based it off of Psalm 19! I think everyone else gave some good suggestions for punctuation, so I won’t say much, except, keep up the good work! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! Brycen hit Tali when everything went black and he swung out his fist. So, he didn’t mean to, but it just kind of happened.
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
Thank you. Indeed. There’s so many days that I’m thinking, Lord come please.
Then at the same time my heart aches for all the unsaved friends that I have who have no interest in Christ at all and I’m thinking Lord wait maybe with time I can plant enough seeds and you’ll change they’re stony hearts.
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Felicity replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
I just caught up on the parts you posted since I was on here last!
When did Brycen hit Tali? I was a bit confused there, but really interested in seeing where you’re going with this Atticus guy. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
WHOA, you’re in the middle of all my favorites!
Lol, that’s awesome!
God of the Garden is fantastic. Do you have a favorite Green Ember character??
I’ve only read through like chapter 2, and I’m enjoying it so far! 😀
Hm… idk. Maybe Heather? I’m not entirely sure. XD
Also, please tag me to rant about Ranger’s Apprentice. It’s phenomen…
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! 🥰 Sure did! Watched it yesterday at the Theater…first time (and only my second time, lol!) I’ve been in a theater since How To Train Your Dragon 2 came out 😂
The movie was just sooooooo good tho…it’s probably one of my favorite animated movies 😉
We loved it! We weren’t big fans of the plot. (I think I missed the inciting…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Hey!! I’m still on, but only for a few more minutes. 🙂
Doing pretty good! Wbu?
Oooh, cool! XD
I’m almost in high school. I’ll be a freshman for the 2023-24 school year. 😉
I’m in the middle of rereading the Wingfeather Saga! Rn I’m in the middle of book two. I’m also reading God of the Garden by Andrew Peterson. F…[Read more]
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