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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.
mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.
Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.
Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,
“The great march of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.
Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.
The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 4 weeks ago
WOW!!!!!! THAT’S AMAZING!!!!!!! I love the drawing, the idea, the story, the feel, the look….. OH MY WORD!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Yeah, Hue was a character who needed to be saved.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Yes, that was the Stiens
Hmm, interesting that you should say that…………. I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Hey, I can’t get over your pfp!! Is that you and Andrew? (outside of church is what I would guess)
I’d love to know the story behind the picture. If you’re willing to share…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)
Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
You are very welcome.
And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh wow!!!
I love this!!!
Okay, two things I noticed.
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati?
Is he a third character?
If so, could…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
You got the section from today I’m assuming….
Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty  @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.
Here’s the full verse and reference.
No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]
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Yes, that is me and Andrew. It’s actually outside of the house of a CC parent.
In CC, we have what is called Protocol. It’s like prom, but instead of dancing and partying, we go to a 3-5 course meal and then a concert or play. The idea is to learn manners. We did a 3 course meal, then went and saw a concert of the men’s singing group,…[Read more]
Oh that’s so fun. It’s exactly how I imagined you two would look like in a situation. 😂
I wish our homeschool group did that. We just have the Winter Formal, no parents allowed. It’s pretty sketch.
Also, I’m guessing Andrew’s is from that same event? Those pictures are so fun! I love them!
Yes, Andrew’s pfp is from the “funny” picture we took as a group. He just cropped out everyone else.