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Jonathan

@freed_and_redeemed     @hybridlore      @koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @linus-smallprint

BOOK AESTHETIC!!!

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Thinking of a few others……

@kyronthearcanin      @whalekeeper      @theducktator       @grcr

@jonas

Okay, again, I’m saying yes, but we’ll see what life looks like. It can be very unpredictable.

@jonas

*gaspeth* How dare you wasteth my timeth!!

😂

Sure, I’ll take a look.

@grcr

Ahh! So cute! Especially the blonde! She is adorable!

@hybridlore

awesome!

@linus-smallprint

Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

I understand that though.

A World War II spy story!

Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

@hybridlore

I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]

@jonas

I second what Ellette says. It depends on what things look like with my mom and how much time I’ll have between family stuff and working. But I would really love to do this!!!

@whalekeeper

Ohhhh that makes more sense.

And then Iver proves himself right. On the one hand, maybe this just means Sef believes the lies more than other people would. But I got the sense that Iver was referring to how long she has lasted without dying. If that’s true, Sef would have to possess more strength than a normal Pythonos’ sla…

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@koshka

Really?! Ah yay!!!

Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!

Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?

@jonas

Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@whalekeeper

I’m confused…what gave you the impression that Sef is stronger than most people the Pythonos use? that wasn’t my intent at all…

The whole point of the chapter was to show more of her weaknesses and now I’m confused XDXD

@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]