Janellebelovedpig

@savannah_grace2009

I totally get it, Hugo can be a little… annoying.😂 It will be super fun!

@acancello

though…Ottoline will probably not like him back :(((( she’s just not the type, lol

but that will be so much fun to write!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh! It could be!

@acancello

It’s fine, I was hoping it would be kinda romantic, lol i love romance!!!

@grcr @minerlaizedwritings @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Aright, Hugo is going to join! Sorry if anyone characters are different from what they really would be like, its sorta hard to write them. 🙂

Hugo

Hugo trudged up a hill as the sun beat down on his back, “Where the heck am I going?” He thought, “wander awa…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Wait…you don’t believe in the trinity?

@jonas

cool!

@jonas

it’s okay! I’ve done that with your tag too lol.

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

btw guys it’s really cool that you’re siblings and both love writing! My sister hates reading and only writes when forced to (she’s eleven), and my brother only writes because he sees me write, but that’s only every couple years or so (he’s seven years old)

I had to teach myself how to write and can’t really talk…[Read more]

@jonas

Me like. Me like lots.

Same! My favorite is Krenna. It’s really cool how she can split her consciousness!

@trailblazer

I love it! Charley annoys me, lol (I’m guessing that’s the point!)

@trailblazer

I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.

I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]

@trailblazer @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Ottoline

She sighed with relief as Lane looked away from her scars and turned his attention to the girl in the doorway. But she knew it was only a matter of time before they would get brought up.

“Oh, no, it’s not my statue, or my house even…” the bewildered girl…[Read more]

@grcr I love it!!!

Ottoline

“Do not worry,” Amir turned his warm eyes to the trembling boy. “She only shoots deer. Lucky for you.” Lane nodded.

“It’s not my statue,” Ottoline scoffed, rolling her eyes. “I couldn’t care less if you broke it or not.” Lane sighed with relief, brushing the hair out of his eyes.

“Just do not scare her, or she might…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! lol

@grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Ottoline

She stepped inside the building, and stopped dead in her tracks.

“What is this place?” she asked in awe. Brightly colored streamers fluttered from the ceiling, multicolored lights lit up the room, and the stone floor shone. A strange kind of music filled the room. She…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

Hi! Just letting you guys know that I wont be on today, its my brothers 13 birthday and were having his party also! I cant believe how fast hes growing up (I know I sound like a mom, lol, but seriously, that’s how I feel😂) So I am really busy today, (I’m also going to ask him to join KP, since he always wants to write, but cant get motivated)…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m so excited!!!!