Janellebelovedpig

@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc

@keilah-h

Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!

@the_lost-journal

Lol

thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!

Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD

THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!

Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant!  Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!!

@rae

Oh man!!

I’ll be praying, Ruth! Please keep us updated!

@hybridlore

hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?

yes, I designed all of it.

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?

@keilah-h

Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?

Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!

Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.

Good thing you looked. XD

I already found a typo.

And something wonky is up with his outline…..

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.

Any thoughts?

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@hybridlore

Thank you!!

People wanted to know what the insignia on the uniforms was, and it took a bit to design it, but I think I pulled it off.

Glad you like it!!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

for everyone who was asking, I finally designed an Insignia. What do y’all think?