Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore

YAY! So excited for you!!! It looks great!!

@jonas

You might not care, but I try to maintain a fairly equal ratio of male MCs to female MCs in a book. This shouldn’t be the deciding factor, but consider that adding Liv as a MC would give you a 2 to 4 ratio (double the amount of female characters to male), whereas you currently have as even a ratio as possible with 2 to 3.

Obviously, you m…

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@freedomwriter76

Oof, sounds pretty sad to me…poor siblings 🥺 (sounds pretty angsty XD)

From what I’ve read, your book seems really interesting!! 💕🤩

Well that scene was from an old story, which gave me the idea to write my current WIP based off of that. So it didn’t make it through editing, neither did most of that very sloppy 41K very rough “dr…[Read more]

@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!

=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=

Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.

“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You dont RP to much, I love to read yours!

@hybridlore

I love your blog! I like the whole thing and dont have anything I dont like about it, its all working fine! I do have some questions about Wix though. right now, I’m using blogger and dont really like it. I cant have a follow button or email subscription buttons or anything I need, Wix has that right? And on the creating the blog…[Read more]

@jonas

I would say it completely depends on relevance to the main plot. Is she going to have future interactions with the main cast? Will her actions have an impact on the overall story? If not, then I would say it would be best not to, but there is another option.

Yeah, she’s going to play a part in the story.

That makes sense, I’ll experiment I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Only read this if you want too…but look how outdated the style is!!! I can’t believe I used to write like this, and that was just last year! CRINGE. This is one of the only scenes that I teared up during…and i still don’t really get why. It’s not that good tbh…

Jorryn

After what seems like at least a million more steps…

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@freedomwriter76

made me cry so many times writing it tho! XD

I haven’t actually cried while writing any stories (though I have a feeling that my current WIP will do it sometime soon as it deals with abuse, romance, and evil in general and some parts are sad!).  I once wrote a sad chapter last spring for a school assignment about this boy who was…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Hey, it’s me again, lol. I have a question. Is it fine to give a side character a POV if it’s for one or two chapters?

Here’s some context. If you guys remember Liv from chapter 5 (where Lilitu steals bread), I was thinking she could play a part in Lilitu’s story. She’s kind of secretly supporting the Paynes and I wanted…[Read more]

@acancello

I should have the next scene done by tomorrow for the RP 🙂

Oooh I’m excited! I’ll wait to write mine until you post it, because I don’t want to accidentally have the same idea, lol. (And I RP way too much on here, lol)

@janellebelovedpig

AHHH! I think Sarafini left us! NOOOO! All her posts say anonymous and I can’t see her profile 🙁

okay i should probably be done for now…

but guys ^^…

it kills me

okay i just found a bunch i saved XD

@freedomwriter76

HAHA, love it!

It’s very accurate tho…🤣

@smiley

YES! I’ve seen that one! It fits their personalities so well. XD

@freedomwriter76

So glad y’all like the fanfic idea!!! 💕💕 (i may or may not be writing a scene for it currently…😏)

OoOo, yayyyy

and also, Euodia, I feel the EXACT. SAME. WAY. 😂😂 haha, I always love looking through old artwork with my younger brother XD

HAHA yesssss!!!