Janellebelovedpig

@jonas

@esther-c

Blogger is OK. I like how its really simple to set up and use, but the only bad part is that you cant have an email subscription button and as far as I know you cant customize your backgrounds and have to pick from the few they have. Its very easy to use though, I haven’t tried any other blogging sites, but have been thinking about…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I like these scenes!

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol is Fracture still doing his maniacal laughter, utterly oblivious to everything happening around him? 😂

Yep. XD

Fracture

“You coming?” something poked him. He did the logical thing and screamed.

Rolling away and jumping to his feet in what he hoped was a threatening fighting stance.

“HOW DARE YOU tell ME what to do!”…[Read more]

Ottoline

She had to work with Ellis?

I’m dead. So dead. She wiped her sweaty palms on her pants. Why couldn’t he have paired me with someone who won’t murder me the first chance we’re alone? (I know he wouldn’t actually, but she just is scared of everything, XD)

She was terrified. Terrified of the dragons, of everyone carrying a sword, of El…[Read more]

@jonas

Sound good! And what did I miss about teams of two? I see them above, but what are they doing together?

@trailblazer

Ok, thanks!! 😄

@jonas

Sounds good 👍

And did I see a post about the characters being in teams of two or something like that?

@trailblazer @euodia-vision @hybridlore @acancello @janellebelovedpig

Hey bloggers! 😁

So I’ve actually been seriously considering starting a blog so that I can start building my writing platform as soon as possible. I’ve brainstormed and I think it’s just going to be about writing and books/book reviews. I’m not sure if I’ll start it soon or n…[Read more]

@loopylin

I’ll just look up meme templates and download them off the internet. XD There may be websites where you can find them, but I’m not sure. Then I just add the text that I want. (And if I’m adding a picture, I’ll do that via Canva)

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@freedomwriter76 @smiley @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-really-(:

Some of my own memes 🤭 (sry if they’re blurry 😬)

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness, that worst writer one is one of my favorites. 😂

@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]