Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

yes, this fixes everything.

am I the oldest?
guess!

😂

@koshka @keilah-h @loopylin

Rory

Rory glanced between the twins. “I don’t think I’m lost. I’m just confused…” he trailed off and found himself watching Leo from the corner of his eye. “You see, all the schools I’ve been in have been very… organized and grown-up. We didn’t have free time, we weren’t running around, and we certainly we never, e…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Next time don’t tell me there is supposed to be a big plot twist in a chapter so I don’t be stoopid and search for more fish.

I only said it because I’ve been reading WAY too much Alcatraz, thanks to you.

BTW, I can’t get over the way you spelled “Stupid”.

@esther-c

Great! I’m always here if you want to bounce more ideas. I love listening to ideas and helping form plots. 😉

@linus-smallprint

Ohhh, that hurts!! Ohhh, poor Martha! You can feel her pain! This is one of THE BEST chapters you have ever written, which is kinda funny since you wrote about a girl in this one. You could just really feel her and really relate to her thoughts. Man, it was just so good. Like, super, super good. Cracking job old boy! (lol)

As…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin @keilah-h

Rory 

Rory snapped into an alert posture as two strangers entered the room. He could see them in his peripheral vision, and his first thought was ambush. As soon as the two girls started yammering at each other Rory relaxed a little. Leo’s obvious military awareness was putting him on edge almost as much as nails on…[Read more]

Ope… I lost my characters again….

@highscribeofaetherium

Feel free to intro your charries and have them run into mine! They’re just kinda roaming the castle right now. I have their intro somewhere… either pg 446 or before.

@theducktator

No I don’t, I’m so sorry!! I wasn’t able to make the time to compile all of them. I like the one’s Loopy shared (thanks, @loopylin !!!), but this month I can work on putting together some fall prompts to do for October.

@mineralizedwritings

Bucky looks so good!!! I’m not an artist, but the shading ended up really good!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I really like the second idea!!

Actually, I was just thinking about it today and I noticed that Miles likes to have things under his control, so it wouldn’t make sense why he would willingly give Audrey away to someone, where he has no control over what the rest of her life looks like. A kidnapping would probably make t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Thank you so much for your input!! You’ve given me a lot of inspiration to draw from and I loved hearing what parts of books impacted you the most when you were younger!

Write not only for their “now” but also for their “tomorrow.”

Remember that souls are the same size, no matter their age.

I gotta pin these on my wall…

@freed_and_redeemed

I enjoyed it!!

There were a few things that I thought weren’t as good as they could have been though. I felt like Leon became pretty repetitive for at least half of the book. Isaiah kept saying similar things to him and he kept responding the same way. It did show how bitter he had become, but I did find it redundant and n…[Read more]

Also:

I’m really enjoying the book so far!

@linus-smallprint

In some stories, such as the Chronicles of Narnia, it took me a while to figure out that Aslan represented Jesus. In others, Christian allegories and ideas were far harder to spot, such is in The Lord of the Rings, where I didn’t find much until I read the Silmarillion (a sort of prequel). Within your series, I found it very…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*goes in corner and sulks*

comes back out again.

But that’s the WRONG bombshell!!! I meant about Aaron being able to get out and him leaving them all!! Not the wall. The wall affects the fact that no one is coming to rescue them now. If there was anyone coming.
should I still have them trying to escape?

btw, do you think A…[Read more]

@koshka

Did Rory’s reply get lost in all of this?

@theshadow

Thank you!!

here’s another

@koshka

Keilah isn’t active, so for now Hunter is still out in the hall where Rory left him.

Rory

Rory eyed the young man infront of him. The smile was friendly enough, but he too seemed on the alert. Training like that just wasn’t easy to shake. Rory knew that all too well.

Rory straightened and tilted his chin up a little, his feet…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Ok don’t know how much of this you know so I’m just going to say it, even though you haven’t done anything wrong: We keep everything here PG, so no one dies (though sometimes they get “sent to the hospital”, a vague reference to severe injuries), and we don’t really do blood. But other than that, pretty much anything goes. Just keep i…

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