Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore

You better add that those are my characters, because I know at least Freedom has a Leon. And she’s actually been pretty nice to him.

Lately.

@hybridlore

HEY!!!

I haven’t done anything to them!

yet…………….

lol. Okay, you can have them for now.

I know I’m not super keeping up with this topic, but I’ve been praying for every prayer request that shows up! 🙏 <33

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes so much sense!

Oh yeah, I get that. I have a lot of writing knowledge, I just don’t always apply it 💀😂

@hybridlore

The protection squad was formed for Freedom and Godlyfantasy’s characters. Let’s see, I think Riker, Paxton, and….. ugh, I can’t remember. There were a couple other on there. I think Leon got added too. They would go and kidnap them so that Freedom and Godly couldn’t kill them. Then they would have to try to get their characters…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You like Julian and Leon, eh?

Hmmm. *makes dark and devious plans*

lol. just joking.

maybe.

@hybridlore

I know I did.

Someone threatened to add Rory to the protection squad, but I think Joseph needs it the most. lololol.

@hybridlore

Oh go ahead and keep reading. I was meaning you aren’t someone who has gotten backstory detail because you asked too many questions and I gave in and answered. lolololol.

Yes! You are completely correct. Except they were betrothed. They were supposed to be married the month after she died. So, yeah, that was the initial blow, and…[Read more]

@hybridlore

yes, you would be right.

Kill Joseph?

Hmm.

I like it.

lololololol.

Don’t worry, the book is already written, so weather he lives or dies is out of your hands. 😉

@whalekeeper

No girl, I love it! I think the key to writing chaotic scenes is pacing. Like if you have a lot of long sentences people are going to get confused, but in your case, you stuck to shorter/mid-length sentences and sprinkled in only a few long ones. It worked really well 👌

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, so sweet! 🥹

@whalekeeper

Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩

@freed_and_redeemed

Love the aesthetics!!! They look so good!! 🤩

@the_lost-journal

I just found the page where they tried to kick me off KP. lololololol.

I’ll copy it over on here if you want to see.

@hybridlore

Go away, you aren’t allowed to snoop in my dark character killing past! *hissss*

lolololol.

I think you know. But if you don’t, you’ll find out soon enough.

@the_lost-journal

Yeah, I did it in book one.

And I killed his best friend too.

@hybridlore

So, because I’m board and want to bother you (just kidding, lol)

You are one of my first readers who knows nothing about any of the characters and are meeting them all as you read. Sooooo, what do you think happened in Leon’s past that made him abandon faith on his gods? (a crazy step for a soldier as I have explained above)

@the_lost-journal

I just wiped out my Main Character so……… yeah.

I kill a lot of characters.

@hybridlore

I’m glad you like it!!!! You get bits and pieces of Joseph’s backstory in LTBL, (Aaron i there for a good part of it) but you don’t get this much. So yeah, glad you liked it.

Okay, yeah. i’ll take a look at that sentence!

Yes! that’s my boy!!!!! Poor guy, he’s been through some tough stuff, as is evidenced by some of what he…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Yes, it is! We had this huge thing where I was trying to kill off a character that everyone loved, and they were saying I was a danger to KP and needed to be thrown off! we were all joking of course, and the funniest thing was that KP crashed right at that point, so everyone joked that it was trying to get rid of me.

I totally…[Read more]