Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore

*steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*

Wow. loyalties changed.

So I’m free to kill Asher, Julian, and Sabina?

*steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*

Wow. loyalties changed.

So I’m free to kill Asher, Julian, and Sabina?

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NEXT SECTION

The next morning when Joseph woke, he lay in bed a moment, trying to remember what had happened the day before. All at once it came back to him and he scrambled to his feet. Yanking on his vest he hurried into the hall and knocked on Asher and E…

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@highscribeofaetherium

love it!!!

I was wondering where you got your new profile pic.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m feeling pretty confidant with this new switch, so you can delete the old version. lol.

What’s with suddenly swapping the governor in this new version?

well, a few reasons.

1. Flows better with the idea that they just opened the gates after 7 years.

2. Why else would Asher and Eric have s…[Read more]

@grcr

I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33

@loopylin

So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!

@highscribeofaetherium

That looks soo good!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

The humor in that chapter is so good. lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

Good, good. I’m glad this is better.

Yesterday we reached Acts 12 in a sermon series at our church, and I almost started laughing because it was pretty perfect. So yeah, that’s where I got my inspiration.

@raxforge

The ship.

The way you interact with one another would be very awkward if you weren’t.

Just saying.

@hybridlore

Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.

No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.

@hybridlore

Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.

I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

You win.

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

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ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@theducktator

How did you not know that?

lol.

It was pretty obvious. lol.

@whalekeeper

 

Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)

@liberty

Nah, that was figurtive. I talk now like I’m writing a novel.

I also forgot to mention that he’s a cardboard cutout right now: dry, without a personality, but with some sort of 2D substance I’ve inserted into him which goes along the lines of “you were a bad person, now you’re trying to change, good luck.”

@liberty

So I’ve got a character who’s kind of a dog.

Lemme explain.

His name is Winston and he used to have a human form, except that he wasn’t the nicest guy and a sorceress came along and cursed him. So now he’s a dog. He can still talk and stuff, but he looks like a dog.