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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I know I included a longer passage, but that is something that I think I’m going to do in some situations. I want to have God’s word very clearly there, backing what I’m saying. I do have the scripture passages indented in the actual book, so it will be easier for a reader to just skim if they wanted.
Okay, I can work on the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.
Thoughts Anyone?
&n…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
We sure do!!!!
Here’s the back to The Crimson Rose.
I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.
Three Stories. One War. One Faith.
In the shadow of World War II, Josef faces a terrible choice. Desperate to avoid the inevitable conscription to the Eastern Front,…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh cool! Thank you!I’ll have to check that out! I love older cartoons. Like the Tintin TV series, or Liberty’s Kids, etc. It looks like the art they did for the animal Robbin Hood!
Nope, this isn’t Fateful Night, cause that’s already written and published.
This is my newest WIP called The Crimson Rose.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
what do you think of the story section? as interesting as Friedrich?
Wait……. redwall got made into a movie!?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m back. Here you go.
                 Reuven’s hand was shaking, so he dropped it into his lap. Opening his book, he let his eyes trail over the pages of Latin verbs. He had faithfully continued to study, even after leaving university, and he knew these words by heart. Still, he forced himself to read over them slowly and careful…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, yes, Friedrich is from TCWM
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Everyone knows Flint. Everyone in that town knows everyone. It’s a very funny movie. You should watch it. We watched it one night when we were moving house. We had been working since sunup and it was close to twelve. Everyone had been in tears once that day, all the packing tape was gone, and dad was like, “Okay, I’m ordering pizza and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
liberty!!! I’ve been waiting all morning for your email. I love to talk people silly with this sort of thing, and no one else really likes to listen. lol.
Okay, the word count is…….
Fateful Night–> 90,923
The Choices We Made–> 888,823
Oh that’s so cool that you have your sister to help you!! No, I haven’t heard of InD…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I know right! To bad you didn’t post it at the beginning.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, you won’t be getting any more of Friedrich. That book has been published, and I wrote that scene because I was thinking of Friedrich. If you want to read more you have to buy it.
You might get a little of other things though.
Um. Yes I would. That’s what I’m doing on here. I’m pelting y’all with snowballs and I don’t even know…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @loopylin  @theshadow  @keilah-h  @rae  @linus-smallprint  @whalekeeper @theducktator @esther-c @liberty
Is it bad that this scene came to mind and I smiled with evil glee?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
anyone eating the brown banana is crazy!! There is only one proper banana, and that is the banana between “almost there” and “ripe”
It’s yellow with streaks of green.
that is the only good banana
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
my company name is Wild Horse Publishing. I did it because that was always the name we used since I was tiny when my brothers and I made movies or pretended to sell books. ☺️
I can send you the info page from the back of one of the books if you’re interested in the company.
I have not been to a convention. I haven’t found any near me…[Read more]
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