Janellebelovedpig

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@linus-smallprint

Come ON.

*ushers my little sister in to do her cute face* please don’t kill Charles?

Being a writer, I know you’ll probably kill him.

@keilah-h

I’m curious about the Australia story.

And yes. Italian food is AMAZING. My family has recipes that have been passed down for generations.

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!

@whalekeeper

That is so cool!

*Goes to look it up.*

@theducktator

Thank you!

@theshadow

It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Sammmmeeee!!!!

And thank you so much!!!!

I agree with you so much on that hahaha! Like “I’m sorrry this is probably so cringe but I love it!!!”

@whalekeeper

I had to manually go in and change a lot of things because I wanted only parts of some of the pictures to be colored.

How did you do that? I must know!

@whalekeeper     @koshka

(We can head back to school in the morning/whenever. Rory needs to be Leo’s assistant, right? Or are the two going their separate ways?)

Rory

Rory just lay there, listening to the steps. He felt himself go ridged out of instinct, but he didn’t run. Someone got down beside him and Rory closed his eyes, waiting for the…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay I’ll try to get one done tomorrow.

@whalekeeper

I don’t think Koshka and I thought anyone was going to follow us…. 😁