Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore

That sounds like a lot of fun!I might have to do it.

When is it?

@hybridlore

what is it?

@hybridlore

haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD

@hybridlore

You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.

The 50 I’ve been saving for a rainy snowy day.

@hybridlore

I wrote 500 words.

I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.

I shall now snowball you!!!!

SNOWBALL X20

AND

YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!

SO.

THERE.

@hybridlore

HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)

So glad you liked the section!

Yeah, poor Roland.

@rae

Nice!!! I like it! Very good scene! You had me pretty tensed up! XD

Yes, this really was a good scene.

I bet he’s gonna die in the end.

One small problem I had….. the father is encouraging Baron and Jenna’s relationship, but Baron is not a Believer, and God commands that we no be unequally yoked. I would think that if her father was…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

HELLO EVERYONE!!!! I’M BACK!!!!!!!!

I survived– barely, and am well and alive– sort of.

(Came down with a nasty cold the minute I got home. Ugh.)

Anyhow, it’s so good to be back!! I have the next section, and I may post another today as well. I hav…[Read more]

@loopylin

… May I ask what’s in Alpha’s pockets?

Ha! Took me a second to figure out where this is going……. I’ll be surprised if they’re both still alive and out of jail by the end of the day.

@theducktator

*gasp* It’s a date!

Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…

I would like to know as well… 🤣

Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story &#x1f44…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)

Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]

@hybridlore

OH MY WORD I’M GONNA BE ABLE TO ATTEND THIS ONE–

YAYAYAYAY 11 AM EST

*does a happy dance*

@hybridlore

Oh, dear. Not motivation to keep writing! *whines*

Thanks tho XD I was kind of in a rut and now I’ll have to pick up my feet and actually do something

@freed_and_redeemed

I have this forum open on my laptop. I’m gonna tag you to see if you’re able to find it again. If not, oh well. Just thought I’d give it a try! 😉

@the_lost-journal

You can also do that but do “is this a female” because that seems to be popular theme XD

(where this super cool person is wearing a mask and then they remove their mask and its a GIRL 😮

Immediately comes to mind…….

@whalekeeper

Oh, did you have a subplot POV on the side following the rescue?

No, two of my side characters were spies and they kept reporting the enemy and allies movements back to the MC. Plus, at one point when the MC was captured two of the officers get a message and kind of act startled. They leave the room, but the reader hardly notices…[Read more]

@koshka

uh yeah! Poor kid needs it!
(I gotta work a Leo into his actual book.)

he’s gotta enough hands! Pfft!

Rory

Rory smiled slightly. Sometimes Leo’s words completely flummox him, but Rory had learned to read tone and body language over words long ago. He wasn’t exactly sure what Leo meant, but he understood the tone.
“so… what do you ne…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory shrugged. “I don’t know what siblings are supposed to look like. I don’t even know if I have any of my own.” He shrugged again and picked out a few more screws. “Quincey is a fortunate boy,” he said, softly.