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@loopylin

*gaspeth!*

Rory lost his date!

Hahahah!!!

Not that dancing would have been good for him. He would have freaked out and killed something or run……… buts still. It’s the principle of the matter. *British sniff*

lololololololol

@loopylin

That blasted group is constantly threatening me and stealing my characters. *crosses arms indignantly*

lolololol

And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3

Aw, thanks!! That’s so kind of you! 🙂

It’s a title I earned on KP after threatening a character Highscribe liked. XD I guess I’m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay…. yes that about matches them!

You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them.  We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉

@hybridlore

NOTHING! XD

I just told someone to kill off a character that she happened to like……

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore

Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.

I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]

@koshka

Oh my goodness. Love it.

@hybridlore

That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.

@hybridlore

Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]

@hybridlore

no, it makes perfect sense.

He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

@hybridlore

WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!

He also needs to die.

I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂

“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.

Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”

“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…

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@hybridlore

great progress!!!

I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]

@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

love the cake!!!!

@the_lost-journal

tbh, I am also confused about the teachings  XD And I do wonder why. But also I get this feeling of fullness after going to confession. So whatever it is, I think I am going to stick to it! Also  thanks for the prayers. I won’t be able to get back to anyone for a while btw. I AM GOING SKIING! ^o^

I agree, it does help to tell oth…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

okay hahahaha sounds good lol

@whalekeeper

no I haven’t!!!

Doesn’t everyone have at least a fragment of virtue though? (Sorry, I don’t mean to shut down everything you’re saying, this is just my thoughts. 😅) I’m not saying they have to be someone that the readers will look up to and be like, “Oh my word I want to be just like them.” I understand mankind is sinful and there probably are people out there t…

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