Jane Maree

Good answer @xonos-darkgrate. I recommend reading this.

Erm.. Hang on… I would assume so. Well, at least that makes more e=sense than you being up at 12:30am!
Although, I must leave now. *waves* Farewell!

@catwing *blinks* I’m in Australia, but for some reason I don’t think that it is 12:30 am for you…

@catwing Wait a moment. You said yesterday. I’m confused… are you American? And if so then I am officially confused about what time it is over there these days…

@catwing Heheheh, yes, all is well.
And I do that example to people all of the time, mostly because I’m a grammar and word freak!
Um, yes, I like Sudoku. I take it you do?

@xonos-darkgrate Yep, the narrative voice is sweet.

@Daeus don’t hesitate to poke me if I forget— I’ve got about a million things swirling around in my head lately. 😛

@xonos-darkgrate I agree, that was really well done. Very good at drawing the reader in, too. And I love the beginning quote by the Jake of Jacks guy.

I have a few things to point out, but they’re mostly just structural/punctuation stuff. The first paragraph, after it says The City of Cards, is mixing past and present tense. I can see how it…[Read more]

@salome01w4g I’m listening to The World will know from the Newsies. Highly motivational for editing

@daeus Indeed.

@catwing yes it is!
Rewriting can be a pain! I have a half finished rewrite of a novel which I just ended up putting away because it confused me so much.i haven’t seen Despicable Me in years so I don’t know the song you speak of but Ok!
I’m guilty of underprotective parents too. 😕
@salome01w4g yay! *throws confetti, glitter, feathers whatever…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper On that note, are you okay with people using the Message as a guide? So, using something like ESV then cross referencing with things such as the Message and KJV? (I know that they were totally different, but that was the point.)

Heheh, nice verse! Although, I will be willing to point this one out…

1 John 4: 7-8 “Beloved, let us…[Read more]

@jess-penrose I had no idea people raved about my books. I’ll have to write more of them. lol

@kate-flournoy Quite magnanimous of you. *bows low*

@epicaddie2 colds are no fun. Definitely praying for you. ☺ *encouraging smile sent across the oceans*

@rolena-hatfield No problem. I don’t really want to leave this lovely place….
@aratrea I was wondering if I should’ve asked you.

@the-real-kapeefer Dude? Seriously? Don’t do that to me again. I wrote a page long rant on why not to use the message bible because of you. 😛
Ah well. I was able to apply my biblical doctrine class to all this, sooo…

And can I please point out that one verse.

John 1:14 rewrite : “The word became flesh and blood and moved into the neighborhood.”
XD

@salome01w4g well, at least we know now that there are lots of people here to give spiritual concern!

@catwing I shall join you! I do feel a lot better. I’m still very sore (I don’tknow what’s wrong with me but my mum is going to make me a doctor’s appointment) but i feel a lot better emotionally. I realised i need to stop seeing everything as a chore and see it as something fun. Especially my story. I love this story, I want to make it better,…[Read more]