Jane Maree

@raevynstar He sounds good to me. 😀 The one thing I would point out is that sometimes writers will make these types of characters mopey. It’s fine for characters to be sorrowful and introspective, but they must have a strong goal they are pursuing at the same time, or it will be hard to root for them.

@dragon-snapper That’s right. You got it.

@xonos-darkgrate Welcome to the dark side, Xonos. We have ice cream.

XD

Well, you might’ve guess that this isn’t the dark side. We have too many elves and unicorns for that. But anyway, welcome! Glad to have you!

Cool name, BTW.

@salome01w4g *waddles along, whistling somewhat innocently*

Oh, and if he has PTSD does he get to have a Labrador follow him everywhere? 😀 😉

@raevynstar Ooh! He does sound like a great character. For someone who controls fire, he doesn’t sound like very much of a fighter, which I think is great, because when someone thinks fire, they think of a fighter. Nice and unique, that one. *thumbs up*
If you want to improve him, I’d discover some of his quirks. What does he do when he’s…[Read more]

@raevynstar Ah, hiatus. I suppose those are good from time to time. What kind of sci-fi is it? (star warsy/star treky or I Robot-y or something else)?

@Kballen I’m a little late, but hopefully not by too much.

Welcome to KP! I hope you enjoy it here!

What’s your favorite food?

@raevynstar Hi! Welcome to our realm!

SCIENCE FICTION! Finally, someone else who writes sci-fi! Do you have a WIP?

@raevynstar Hi Raevyn. Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.

It’s always cool to meet other poets out there. You’ll have to share one of your pomes with us sometime.

Btw, do you know what your personality type is?

@jess-penrose
Well, in my opinion, I wouldn’t use the Message bible because even though it is an easier version to read and uses more colloquial terms, it isn’t necessarily doctrinely ‘sound’. One verse that is extremely important to us as Christians is this “Before Abraham was, I Am.” This clearly states that Jesus is God, very important to…[Read more]

Hey, Xonos. I can’t do Harry Potter either. So, YOU ARE NOT ALONE MY FRIEND!!!!

@epicaddie2 I will be praying!! *virtual hug*

@catwing I don’t usually mind editing. I just hate rweriting. But still its good and I won’t ever get published if I don’t edit.
Okay, it sounds like a fun song!

@catwing Scarlet by Marissa Meyer is actually a really good riding hood retelling though.
My little brother was the same. It was his favourite movie for ages.
Anyway i need to go. My family is going away for the weekend so i need to pack. I got heaps written though. Three pages when I usually only get one done. Yay!

@catwing anything to do with little red riding hood has always creeped me out. I would hate to even think of a horror version of it! Film scores tend to be really good though. Me likes listening to How to train your dragon and Lord of the rings. Also the Flash’s soundtrack

@salome01w4g urgh! Twilight! *shudders violently*. A vampire and I think the other bloke is a werewolf? What is attractive about that? *continues to mumble incoherently* farewell, friend!

@xonos-darkgrate Heh, you’re welcome! By some sort of blessing or curse, I can’t help noticing all the punctuation-ish things, so it wasn’t a problem. 🙂 The comma is slightly mis/overused sometimes, but I totally understand how easy it is to just go with it when you’re on a roll. Best wishes for the rest of the book!

@catwing I see. So basically the parents were letting the children join a group of fallen angels? That is a bit problematic.