Jane Maree

@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂

My answers to your questions:

1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.

2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.

3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂

4) Yup! 😀

@rochellaine

Cool! I’m actually not going to be around for much longer, since I have physiotherapy today, but I should be around at my usual time today.

Yes, I did. 😀 and I’m sorry, but we will eventually get to the last two chapters 🙁

@skredder

Sorry 😀 I’ve read the first part but I’ve had a crazy weekend and haven’t had time to comment yet, which hopefully I’ll be able to do today 😀

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @catwing @skredder Anyone around? I’m writing!

@warrenluther04 That’s wonderful!!! (Goodbye 🙁 )

@rochellaine

Um…yeah?? I think so. Or wouldn’t it be your Thursday? or your Friday maybe, if we’re being technical, because it’s at 7pm…I don’t know.

It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉

@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..

There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.

I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀

*sighs*

I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.

It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]

@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it  😉

@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂

Hi! I popped in and read this too, just ’cause I was curious. Hope that’s okay.

Overall, it’s really good so far! I’m just a bit confused as to whose POV you’re using to tell the story? At times, it seems as if it’s being narrated by someone altogether different from the characters in the scene, which is kind of disorienting.

Other than that,…[Read more]

Hey @valtmy, I’d also like to point out that google docs does have a feature you can set the doc to that allows you to pick and choose who has access to your doc based on their email, so if you wanted to do it that way, you could.

@valtmy You can public message a few people and then share the doc directly with them.

@sleepwalkingmk

YAYY!!!

Drat it! Google docs and I aren’t talking today. Okay everyone, here is the link

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing

@rochellaine @skredder @jenwriter17

@dekreel O-O Wow. You gotta be the fastest person to ever get Chosen One. That’s impressive

And here is the day we’ve waited for and now is the best of times!!!

Whoops! Ahem, I didn’t mean to start quoting A Tale of Two Cities…or did I?

Either way, the day ew have all been waiting for has arrive and I present…*drumroll*

When Infinity is Empty Prologue–Chapter 2.

Hopefully that excites you. Also, it’s completely unedited and I…[Read more]

@dekreel

Oh. My. Word. Dekreel is a CHOSEN ONE!! Does our fair kingdom have four chosen ones now? @daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper

(Oh, yes, definitely join Camp NaNo, it’s a lot of fun! Do you have an account there?)

@valtmy If you click on someone’s name, and it takes you to the page with their posts and stuff, there is an option for “Public Message,” which lets you send them a message apart from the forum threads. However, other people can see the message if they look at site wide activity page (which I found once, but never found my way back to. Hm.), or if…[Read more]

You know you’re a writer when you have this conversation:

Me to MC: Alright, I know it’s a tall order, but you’re going to have to defeat a witch, reunite a kingdom, save multiple lives, and have a character arc somewhere in there too. And speaking of character arcs, there are like four more minor arcs to add to the mix. No problem, just a little…[Read more]