Jane Maree

@Dragon-snapper I’m going to have to join in and say I can’t see it either. I don’t know what you might be doing wrong.

Still using the same book as before. At this point the protagonist’s main EiL is a tentative It’s better to run than to fight.

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Action: The protagonist, Will -trying to keep himself alive and not do stupid things that other people tell him to- clashes with Side Character over a decision which Side Character made which Will thinks is not a…[Read more]

“And through his faith, though he died he still speaks.” – Hebrews 11:4

@aratrea They don’t change particularly, but there is the sense of doubt and growing tension that continues on and builds up over the next few scenes.

Going with Orphan’s Song again, Chapter 17, I think it’s using point #9 and showing a clash between two characters and their EiL.
(I also think that -flicking through afterward- I must’ve managed to open to one of the hardest chapters to pinpoint a theme in. 😛 )

@evangelinatroy_rose Hi Karina. 🙂 *hugs* Sounds like your life has been tough, but God has been there with you, so that’s great to hear.

@Dragon-snapper oh yay! That’s great. 😀 *mushroom clouds of confetti*
I actually got an email of a new chapter from one of the works I’m critiquing, so I did that. (And goodness did that make me a mess of feels. xP) And then I got a nice bit of plotting happening and I’m almost finished too! 🙂

@Dragon-snapper you should totally check it out. *casually drops link* Camp NaNoWriMo

@dragon-snapper Camp NaNoWriMo. It’s like the November NaNo only cooler because you can set your own word count goals to whatever you’re comfortable with and there’s virtual cabins and yas it’s a lot of fun. Have you heard of it?

@Dragon-Snapper you can count me in! *hurries to go plot for Camp NaNo*

@Audrey-Caylin *flails* THANK YOU!!! -day made- I will keep you in mind. 😀

*still can’t stop grinning* That sounds great! I’m hoping to do it via google doc, so yep, something like that. It’s going to be terrifying but so cool when I get there.

Thank you! I did actually get some plot stuff done, and it was great talking also. 🙂

@Audrey-Caylin eeek yes it will be. *hides* I’ve never gotten this far before. I’m hoping that maybe by the end of May I might have it ready for a couple of alphas. (phrasing it like that is making me think of wolf packs now xD)

Ooh okie so I’m going to be super professional and give you the synopsis…aka random bunch of words that I desperately…[Read more]

@Audrey-Caylin *high-fives back* Yayyy. I sure hope so. The funniest thing is that the other two books – the characters actually fail at the story goal, and the situation just gets worse and worse. So by bok three I suddenly stopped and thought “WAIT. I have to make them win??? NOOO HOW AM I MEANT TO ACTUALLY DEFEAT THIS BAD GUY???” Luckily I have…[Read more]

@Audrey-Caylin, oh yep! I rather enjoy plotting -most of the time- also. Except for the few times when a) I simply want to flop on the floor and give up or b) I’m freaking out because it’s the finale of my trilogy and I just can’t get it wrong because it’s so important.
Nice. 😛 The feedback I often get is “Why, Jane…Why?” Actually, it’s often…[Read more]

@Audrey-Caylin yep something to do with words. 😛
At this stage I’m plotting, so let’s see how long that lasts. 😀

@Audrey-Caylin I’ll be plotting/alpha reading/editing/who know what I”ll actually end up doing. XD

@winter-rose I’ve got to go now, unfortunately. *salutes* I got quite a bit written/plotted/researched but now duty calls me elsewhere. Thanks for the company! 😀

@Kina-Lamb great!! *cheers* That’s super. 🙂

@Kina-Lamb yay! 😀

@winter-rose if you’re still around I’ll join you now. (sorry, I didn’t see this before)