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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper hey. You do whatever you want and I’m totally cool with that. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper yessssss. Do it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper and cookies. 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, oh, oh! You have to mention butterflies wielding timesabers at some point!
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 1 month ago
@Aratrea The 19th won’t work, but the 21st, afternoon or evening would.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper A villain’s minions who are great shots. Also a petition to include @Michael-stanton as the evil overlord. And possibly give Josiah a brother who contradicts him at every turn and is obsessed with hair-styles (all kinds on everybody). XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper *bows, flourishes cape* Awesome is after all our job description. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Maybe my obsession with psychology… or those of us who are devoted Kylo Ren fans as opposed to otherwise. :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper I vote for a sequel! Ummm… I can’t think of anything right off the top of my head I particularly want, but I’ll let you know if I do. 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Kate-flournoy *coughs* Yes, that. XD
@northerner Yesss. *shakes head* I normally don’t do that…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Northerner ha! :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@GracieGirl *squeals* Did you read it!!!??? Wasn’t it awesome? The thing about G. K. Chesterton’s stuff is that you read it, and by the time you get to the end it’s never about what you thought it was going to be about, but somehow manages to be even more awesome. 😀
Incidentally I also read The Man Who Was Thursday and loved it as well. It was…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Because when does Kate not come up with a name that doesn’t mean something?
@Hope *cough* That would be ‘When does Kate ever come up with a name that doesn’t mean something?’
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Help with a Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@delightinlife Everyone else has pretty much covered it. I tend to force myself to write even when I don’t feel like it, that way by the time I do feel like it again I have something done. 😉
Another thing that keeps my mind fresh is working on a few projects at once. I generally have one main project, but I’ll be working on one or two others…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper This is hysterical! Just… just everything. The raspberries and ice cream. And Kate would so be the one to bring home baby dragons… XD And when Josiah came in with a beard and a frog I about died.
I have two favorite lines.
Kate smiled, “Aviur and Kai.”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
My favorite line(s), though there were SO MANY GREAT ONES:
Kate stopped outside of the large doors to the war room. Why was it that there was always some sort of hidden force that held people’s hands back from knocking? Her fist was stuck midair, and she thought back to every book she had read before. Great. Now she was living a cliché.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper I have literally been laughing so hard I can barely read this. HILARIOUS DOES NOT DO IT JUSTICE. Owwwww… *wipes eyes* I love this too much. Excellent job with the characterization, though you made me out much braver than I’ll ever be. *splits face grinning**wipes eyes again*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@GracieGirl hey, that’s really good. I love it, and me being a calligrapher myself I mean that.
And yes… your desk is beautifully clean.
*goes and hides under her own, knocking off several of the odds and ends haphazardly stacked over the top of it* - Load More
