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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@mnvalentine Yes, I was laughing, too, as I wrote it. It’s another one of my favorite parts XD
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel this is so cool! 😀 I CANNOT wait until the next part!!!
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Joy replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 3 months ago
By the way, I really loved your poem “Autistic”! That was really beautiful.
Thank you!! 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@sam-kowal Thanks. That’s okay. I probably should ask someone like @daeus shouldn’t I?
Oh, wait…I think I just did. 😀
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eight: Up a Tree
Having just hidden a Star Trek GIF, Skredder suddenly lifted her head. “Earthquake,” she simply said.
Everyone looked at her. “What?” said Valentine.
“Earthquake! An earthquake’s coming!” Skredder repeated.
“She’s right! I feel it, too!” called Catwing from a tree branch.
“But earth…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@ariel-ashira I think it’s really interesting that there’s an eighteenth-century English dictionary that lists dragons as “now rare!” 😀 And the Bible does mention unicorns, so possibly? There’s not much certainty as to what kind of animal the Bible was talking about, and some say it might have been rhinoceros, but those actually have two ho…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@ariel-ashira But, if you like, you could just imagine that I go around yelling “Sylvester – Sylvester!” all the time. 😀 😀 😀 Maybe I know someone named Sylvester and he’s missing? So I call him all the time, but he never answers.
Which explanation do you prefer?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel Actually I read your post in my email and didn’t even see the italics before answering. 😀 The way the line is structured puts the most emphasis on the second syllable, while the fourth and sixth syllables have a little less emphasis and the eight syllable has the least emphasis besides the non-accented syllables in between. (At l…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:
“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel I don’t know…putting that much emphasis on “it” doesn’t sound quite right, do you think? The second syllable in that line is the one with the most emphasis in the entire line, so I’d feel strange putting all the force on an ambiguous word like “it.”
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Well, signing off! Might be back Monday. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yeah. The thing is, I actually believe dragons are real. 😀 But I do understand they’re looked upon as fantasy creatures. As I said before, I was intending it to be a comic poem, but accidentally made it serious, so that’s probably what the problem with that is.
*giggles* Um, that’s a quote from one of my favorite books. It’s…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀
The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper I’m
procrastinatingwriting! only for a little bit though. anyone wanna join me? -
Rochellaine replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
@ariel-ashira @sam-kowal Haha! Guess I can’t escape from my comical side in poem writing. 😀 Part of the reason might be it was originally intended to be a comical explanation of why I believe in real dragons, but then I turned the dragons into figurative beasts and so thought I changed it to serious.
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
But does no o…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Story Tagging in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@ethryndal Oh my. But now I’m wondering…was it Freda who was in a dream all along? And it’s really Bessy that has to rescue her? Was she dreaming a “dream within a dream?”
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Rochellaine started the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 3 months ago
I’m not very satisfied with my attempt at a serious poem. As many of you know, I write mostly comic poems, and I find them much easier than serious poetry. I have no idea why I wrote this, but since I did, I’d like to be happy with it, so if you are reading this and if you feel like it, go ahead and critique. Thanks! 🙂
I Believe in Dr…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
Goodnight nobody; Goodnight mouse.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel @jenwriter17 I’m writing for a little while now; how about you?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder and I would have rejoiced with the city! Haman doesn’t seem to be, shall we say, a nice guy
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