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@ingridrd My western, as usual. 😉  But now I’ve got to go, so farewell, and happy writing!

@ingridrd You’re not too late. 😀  I’m still here.  What are you working on?

@ariel-ashira Do you not know how to edit posts after posting them?

Well…I’m trying to.  The man just refuses to be rescued.  Actually, though, it’s Chara’s fault.  She’s taking too long to find him.  I really hope she can find him soon, or the story will be pretty boring. 😛

@ariel-ashira Yes, I’m still here!  What are you working on?

@seekjustice Thank you so much!

@ingridrd Oh, interesting. 🙂

Anyone want to join me in writing? @jenwriter17 @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder

@ariel-ashira What I do is I pay attention when I’m singing to what kind of people are nearby.  When I’m in a group of conservative Christians, I sing only hymns.  Then, when I get to know someone better I’ll ask them what kinds of songs they are comfortable with, and if they prefer just hymns/Christian music I’ll continue to sing hymns, but if t…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Praying for you!

@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Will do. 🙂

@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. 🙂

@seekjustice What do you do for second degree burns?  I just tried to google it, and then backed out of a website instead of reading it because I was afraid there would be pictures of the burns there… 😛  I mean, I know generally what you do for burns, but I want to know if there’s any specific treatment that a paramedic or EMT would give on t…[Read more]

@skredder

Better than it has, not as good as it could be.

That describes a large amount of nearly everything I do… 😀

Yup!  Almost done, though.  Hooray!

@seekjustice Well, I can understand that, but it still implies that he was trying to be romantic, while the rest of the scene (as well as what we know of his character) really doesn’t indicate that at all.  The first time he says “romantic” it’s a joke, and a little flirtatious, which is fine, but the second time it just sounds really weird. 🙁  S…[Read more]

@skredder Short stories, huh?  I love writing short stories!  Except…I rarely finish them. 😛  I’ve finished a couple though.  How’s it going now?

@seekjustice That was not fifteen minutes.  That was an hour. 😛  Looks like I’m bad at giving estimates!

But anyway, I’m here now, and it looks like you’re about to leave. 🙁  By the way, I did give you the comment about Justice, but I put it in your document instead of here.  Did you get it?

@skredder Hi!

@seekjustice Haha! 🙂  Yes, definitely we need to be praying.  And no, the world will never learn.

I’ll be departing for about fifteen minutes or so.  See you in a bit!

@seekjustice @catwing Oh, I hope I didn’t just freak you guys out. 🙁  Sorry!  I just heard the news and wondered if you had.

I don’t know if your families talk about big world events like this or not, so maybe I shouldn’t have said anything…

@seekjustice @catwing Well, we (the U.S.) just bombed Syria.  We’ve been talking with Russia for several days trying to decide whether we want to start WWIII.  We don’t know yet what Russia will do in return, since they’re supporting Syria.  I think we bombed places, not people, but I don’t know exactly, since it just happened.  Our relations wit…[Read more]