introvert_girl

Here’s Hannah’s post:

And now I present you: Potato Squash Pudding. (I also present you my shame and the disgrace of all my authoress dignity. 😬😂)

@catwing @rochellaine

Potatoes and Squash, a farmer’s delight
A field he grew and harvested in plenty
And without a clue to his plight!
Alas, a poor farmer’s wife, what is she to do with all this…

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@daeus Thankee. *bows* Well, I tried incorporating small ‘good’ things and it’s been a lot let dismal lately. I think I just let Ike gnaw on dismal’ness’ for too long. XD

@sarah-anson I really like the italicized bit you said there. *nods* I agree. Thanks!

@anne-of-lothlorien  AHH those are great!

Waaaaait, did you copy mine? XD

Can someone please tag me with a topic, too?  I haven’t been tagged yet.  Just because I started the topic with a sample poem that doesn’t mean I don’t want to be tagged…

😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

@salome01w4g I read your poem in my email and it’s great!  Hilarious story!

But…it’s not showing up here anymore. 🙁  Do you need me to copy it from my email and post it for you, or do you have it saved somewhere else?  (I’m pretty sure you have it saved somewhere else, since this is an actual piece of writing rather than a quickly-typed po…[Read more]

@daeus Sorry I didn’t get back to you sooner.  I am usually only around here in the morning and evening…so anyway…

This version is much smoother.  In answer to your comments:

Stanza two; “Most comely he smiled” is better, because otherwise we try to drag “and” out into two beats.  The reason for this is probably that almost all – if not al…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 Yep that would be fine! Yay I’m so glad you like it! 😀

@ashlyvye No I’ve never read it. Ill add it to my ever growing (especially since I joined kp!) reading list. 😀 It sounds really good. Thanks for the recommendation!

@skredder  I’ve seen that movie! Unfortunately I’m pretty sure it’s her last name

@warrenluther04 Okay here he is! 🙂 Sorry, he didn’t end up looking very muscular.. Despite that and other imperfections I hope you like it! (I’m also not confidant that I spelled his name correctly..) *shrug*

@ingridrd  Yes it’s a girl. … Can Peregrine be a girl’s name?

@rochellaine  That’s funny — I was JUST on that site! Unfortunately I didn’t find names I like :-/

@anne-of-lothlorien Oh, I love that!  The faces and captions are all perfect.

@daeus I really like it!  I’ve never written any poem nearly this long. 🙂  I’m putting it in a separate google document myself where I will comment on it, because when I opened yours I got mixed all up in Elizabeth’s comments so that it was hard to go over just for myself. 😀

Since it’s a really long poem it might take me a while to get t…[Read more]

@waterlily Glad you liked it!

@dekreel My first thought was that it could be a nickname for Pearl or Margaret (which means pearl). Some others I found were Perenelle, Peridot, Persis, Pearline, and Perecia.

There’s actually a thread I found somewhere on a baby-naming site which I’ll link to in case you want to wade through it for more ideas. I…[Read more]

@dekreel  The only ones I could think of are Peridot, (A gemstone)  or Periwinkle? (this one isn’t a real name. Well its the name of a shade of purple, and a flower. But I’ve always thought it would make a cute name for a character.)   🙂 Or maybe her full name could be Peri and her nickname could be Pearberry- Actually maybe that’s weird. For…[Read more]

@rochellaine  @jenali  @epicaddie2  @the-real-kapeefer

Thank you all! 😀

@waterlily  @rochellaine  @skredder  @ingridrd  @anyone

Peri can be a nickname, right? What are some names that can have a nickname of Peri?

@introvert_girl

I think it’s all right since you are planning for your protagonist to have character development and a character arc. That your protagonist may not be very likable at the start may in fact be a good thing (because it’s terribly boring to read about impossibly perfect human beings who can do no wrong).

I think most readers can…[Read more]

@mnvalentine

Perhaps this is just me but I dislike covers that illustrate and give readers a clear idea of how the characters look (I want to be able to use my imagination and if I don’t think that the “beautiful heroine” or “handsome hero” shown on the cover is beautiful or handsome, that puts a damper on the whole reading…[Read more]