Kingdom Pen | Ingrid | Friends Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/ingridrd/activity/friends/ Activity feed for Ingrid's friends. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 d0a8d10b750f81c522f75c996718bdb2 Joy replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-interviews/page/28/#post-202538 Tue, 06 May 2025 21:00:04 -0400 Here we go, introducing Peri, Hazel, Mabel, Ester, Sebastian and Julia, my characters from various universes! I’m using a handful of questions I picked up from the archives. These aren’t even all the answers but I don’t want to make a post that’s a mile long and I’m gonna wait to see if people want more. Feel free to ask me or any one of these…[Read more]

]]> f04ece935d37d25413e2ac83a393fd88 Joy replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-interviews/page/28/#post-202501 Tue, 06 May 2025 05:29:33 -0400 …I may or may not have liked this idea so much I spent three hours writing answers from the POVs of six different characters… I’ll share when it’s not the middle of the night haha.

Also @rae Silvanis’s full name is awesome ^.^

]]> 4d6e3d02862093e041967af82ae9e33c Joy replied to the topic Is there a trope you don't see very often that you love? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/is-there-a-trope-you-dont-see-very-often-that-you-love/#post-202493 Tue, 06 May 2025 00:35:19 -0400 If I may add my two cents: an ACTUALLY MATURE romance story with TWO ACTUALLY MATURE human beings who respect each other through and through and even if they break up they’re as courteous as can be

But that’s boring

Ah….. so that’s why it’s so rare…

]]> ce325ae065cbb04c2fe4ab9e1385f413 Joy replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/want-me-to-draw-your-character-2/page/4/#post-200143 Sun, 16 Mar 2025 11:53:37 -0400 @grcr Love your style! To be able to detail hair and faces like that… *insert starry eyed emoji*

]]> 8a8d0a7af45c2af70176998c1f7d735b Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/art-sharing-for-all/page/202/#post-197615 Mon, 10 Feb 2025 22:09:28 -0500 I love all this art so much <3

(also hi you probably don’t know me but I stop by every once in a while to see what’s been happening ^.^)

]]> 725e1bf58ba2a7dc066e822e06a9eedd Joy's profile was updated https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/186464/ Sat, 19 Oct 2024 02:05:18 -0400 0 674a8070bb05330344b84af7a94815ff Joy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/442/#post-187834 Sat, 19 Oct 2024 02:01:42 -0400 Hello, poking my head out of the void to say I hope everyone is doing well and that your creative projects are flowing smoothly ^.^

I was active years ago and have been feeling nostalgic over the past few days haha. Glad to see the forums still alive and kicking!

]]> cce124494ce1cf64cc41b4670ccff5ab Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/an-aggravation-over-stained-glass/#post-170925 Sun, 24 Dec 2023 03:08:43 -0500 I love the imagery the words create! Your style is very different from mine so I don’t know how helpful I can be, but I’ll try! 🙂

What meter are you using? (I’m not very familiar with meter so I have to ask.)

The rhymes are slant rhymes I think? They’re not exact. But it’s pretty consistent until it gets to the last stanza. I don’t think that…[Read more]

]]> 18d7dcb3a7ae2f53afca5cd240ff2550 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/page/2/#post-169293 Tue, 12 Dec 2023 14:50:55 -0500 I love the freeverse (that isn’t freeverse) poem! 🙂 Absolutely! Tag me when you post that poem that’s giving you grief. @koshka

]]> 2414177a14d6a33afcff327b416779aa Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/page/2/#post-169264 Tue, 12 Dec 2023 03:54:05 -0500 Goodness me, I thought I replied to you ages ago, @koshka! Sorry! Now that I think about it, I went down a rabbit hole of web searching and trying to figure out what sort of poem it was, and I think I started to write a reply but must’ve never posted it.

Essentially, it’s a rhyming poem, but not a metered one. Some sources consider it free verse,…[Read more]

]]> 2a1436dc639d024f78f8412fb7625298 Mallory O'Bier posted an update: Lately, I've been brainstorming a very important question to […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/161387/ Sat, 18 Nov 2023 03:59:52 -0500 Lately, I’ve been brainstorming a very important question to my WIP: Why do the aliens attack? While I’d been kinda hoping to leave it as simply random and kinda comical, lately I’ve been wondering if I’m not just being lazy. Shouldn’t the aliens have a reason or purpose? I have some ideas of my own already, but I’m curious. What do y’all think?…[Read more]

]]> 1 9406f144f6336dfe7e6ba1e3d0c5129a Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/page/2/#post-165014 Sat, 18 Nov 2023 03:46:35 -0500 Now that I think about it, I’m really stuck on the edits so I might as well share what I’ve got here and see if you guys can’t help me get unstuck. I’ve made a few small changes that you may notice, but the main thing that I’m struggling with is settling on an ending.

I’ve written several endings that all have slight variations in words and…[Read more]

]]> 4c6fcf5c2063a7a809fe84332b2629c3 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/page/2/#post-165009 Sat, 18 Nov 2023 03:13:01 -0500 Thanks, @karissa-chmil! This is definitely one of my poems that I find myself going back to a lot and rereading. The atmosphere and imagery of it really draw me in, and I like pondering the meaning of it. 🙂

One of the edits I’m considering is possibly connecting some of the shorter, broken lines in the part of the poem you mention. It’s supposed…[Read more]

]]> a9439c0d8fb9a4c43552143f119553ce Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-165008 Sat, 18 Nov 2023 03:03:46 -0500 Thanks, @koshka! I love the layered meanings of words too. It was funny because I drafted it so hastily and impulsively that I didn’t even realize the full depth of meaning I had woven into the poem–until I was reading and rereading while editing. It was intentional and yet much of it was subconsciously done.

I just let all of the mixed-up…[Read more]

]]> 64b241eb3cd12891f856b1c3dcad4fb0 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Shabby Guitar Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-shabby-guitar-poem/#post-165007 Sat, 18 Nov 2023 02:31:37 -0500 Thanks, @koshka! That would be great. 🙂

I wrote this poem after my uncle’s passing. He was self-taught on guitar and left a few of the instruments behind (as well as many people who loved him).

]]> a10b6fdd5dce3f45c3cf3ae3493bbd48 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Why was my post marked as spam? in the forum Questions and Support https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-was-my-post-marked-as-spam/#post-164225 Sun, 12 Nov 2023 05:06:10 -0500 Okay, I just deleted the old post from my feed, redid the post and reposted it. It worked. 🙂 @kathleenramm

I think it must’ve marked it as spam before because I edited it a few times? Not really sure. Weird.

]]> cedc9e17ad2ddb0e81dff3160b1a3630 Mallory O'Bier started the topic The Shabby Guitar Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-shabby-guitar-poem/ Sun, 12 Nov 2023 05:03:48 -0500 I’d appreciate any and all feedback on this one! It’s an older poem of mine that I really want to polish and improve. Thanks! 😀

The Shabby Guitar

—-

Silent is the shabby guitar 

Locked and put away

Faded are the songs it made 

Folded are the hands that played

—-

Silent is the shabby guitar 

Slowly losing its tune

While people come a…[Read more]

]]> b8a4924788d90a19cfdec9daa2c20c36 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Why was my post marked as spam? in the forum Questions and Support https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-was-my-post-marked-as-spam/#post-164223 Sun, 12 Nov 2023 04:57:07 -0500 Thanks, @whalekeeper ! 🙂

Hi, @kathleenramm ! I haven’t tried reposting it yet. It’s still hidden so far as I can make out. I see on my profile that I made the post, but it’s still marked as spam in the thread section.

]]> e33ad38a7cd65ba8705eb26c4b3087b9 Mallory O'Bier started the topic Why was my post marked as spam? in the forum Questions and Support https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-was-my-post-marked-as-spam/ Fri, 10 Nov 2023 03:06:11 -0500 So I posted a new post in the poetry critiques, but I had to edit a couple of times to make the formatting right. Suddenly, it was marked as spam and hidden? I’m confused.

]]> 87b44d127c2ad4272fa71573d9882eb1 Joy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/270/#post-161451 Sun, 29 Oct 2023 18:53:36 -0400 Didn’t mean to disappear oop… how has everyone been?

]]> 576b283fd4ebc358e6f9ade0e50f9fa6 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-156267 Wed, 13 Sep 2023 03:05:54 -0400 Awesome, @acancello! I prefer that one too! 🙂

I’ll think about it for sure, @light-warrior-pen. 🙂

]]> d63404ed32c890abb84256ca84e598ea Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-156135 Tue, 12 Sep 2023 02:33:36 -0400 @avancello, your comments made my day! I’m so glad you like my poem! 🙂 It really makes sharing it worthwhile! I was seriously thinking about just burying this poem after editing it, but maybe I’ll publish it somewhere after all.

I’m actually considering altering one of those lines slightly, so I’m curious about what you think.

It would be…[Read more]

]]> 59011fc1bf4f8e9775c1ff96b1a55d07 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-156070 Mon, 11 Sep 2023 17:10:54 -0400 Endings are tricky, aren’t they? @light-warrior-pen ? Sometimes they come naturally and effortlessly, but most of the time they take a lot of staring at the WIP, then staring off at nothing, then staring at the WIP again, then writing gibberish, then…

]]> 223e65fa9bfaf8c529a608fc4b339b2e Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-156069 Mon, 11 Sep 2023 17:07:26 -0400 Thanks, @elanor ! 😀

You grasped the concept of my poem perfectly! I’m glad you enjoyed it and found it relatable. 🙂 Because it’s very personal, I really wasn’t sure if anyone would be interested in it. I’m glad I decided to share it!

I’m still working on those last lines. I’m torn between fleshing them out and changing them a bit to better…[Read more]

]]> 4924250875c221f20fd070b7a6b4439c Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/#post-155287 Thu, 31 Aug 2023 19:28:49 -0400 Thanks, @light-warrior-pen ! I’m glad you liked my imagery. 😊

The subject is me, the author, and the boat and sea is a fictional, metaphorical dream I used to describe the feeling of living in myself, I suppose. (Although I was next to the sea and I have been in wooden boats many times. My da is a fisherman, so.)

I’m glad you pointed that out…[Read more]

]]> 95e8a2e534c74e61a3089b662318bcc7 Mallory O'Bier started the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-moonlit-sea-and-me/ Mon, 28 Aug 2023 02:28:34 -0400 Hey, everyone! This is my most recent, completed poem. Please critique it and let me know what you think! I’m looking for feedback an all aspects of the poem (including the name, and consistency of imagery), so don’t be shy if you have any thoughts to share. (I’m working on sharing my poetry more often and seeking regular feedback.)

Thanks!
The…[Read more]

]]> fd49e05650b57d1a634beca43925a5ae SeekJustice replied to the topic Writing Physical DisabilitiesAbnormalitiesHandicaps of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-physical-disabilitiesabnormalitieshandicaps-of-characters/#post-149725 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 14:37:06 -0400 @whalekeeper

love the idea! I also have physical disabilities and a lot (read pretty much all lol) of my friends do too!

 

because it’s such a huge part of my life it shows up in my writing all the time as well!

]]> a53af3862f50b2c7a525be795d3d827d SeekJustice replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-neurodivergent-the-psychological-issues-of-characters/#post-149708 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 12:54:16 -0400 I think its also important to remember there’s a difference between mental illness and neurodivergence. Neurodivergence is just part of the wonderful diversity of humanity, it’s not good or bad, just as any other physical aspect isn’t good or bad. Mental illness is obviously an illness. There can be a lot of overlap of course though!

 

]]> d062b332087ace78484bcfa1cb56c6d8 SeekJustice replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-neurodivergent-the-psychological-issues-of-characters/#post-149695 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 05:16:52 -0400 @godlyfantasy12

This is a topic super close to my heart too!

I have anxiety, depression, and 99.99% sure I have ADHD too (I’ve had a preassessment which was “concerning” but not a full assessment yet). I also have really awful intrusive thoughts as a lovely side effect to anxiety/depression, so I completely get you there. They used to bother me…[Read more]

]]> 44003bcccf2b5c1881948fc3ec341b3b Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/does-anyone-here-write-poetry-or-haikus/page/6/#post-148479 Tue, 20 Jun 2023 23:00:41 -0400 Nice poem, @acancello! And I like yours, @mineralizedwritings, and the Masked and Victory poems, @elanor. 🙂

I haven’t written any lately, I’ve been so busy with work. Maybe I’ll write one this weekend.

]]> a3bb127207f241fdaaf512d2a43a03aa SeekJustice replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/apologetics/page/8/#post-148215 Mon, 19 Jun 2023 02:47:57 -0400 @whalekeeper

I’m rudely butting in because now we’re talking about science and that’s one of my Topics of Passion. I’m more on the side of old earth creationism though, fair warning 😆.

The problem with the argument that nothing can be added to dna is that both YEC and evolutionists rely on rapid additions to dna. If we accept that all our cur…[Read more]

]]> 6deca737099193ae5047f5dbc1f10620 Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/art-sharing-for-all/page/69/#post-148078 Sat, 17 Jun 2023 14:18:09 -0400 @keilah-h The what??? Time to look back at my old posts….. 😛

OH. That’s not mine that is @power ‘s. Mine is the one above that

]]> e4ac36be8a411b05df45b7a2c2da33aa Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-1/page/7/#post-148069 Sat, 17 Jun 2023 01:33:58 -0400 @seekjustice YOU’RE HERE!!! 😀 Yeah I totally understand haha!

I’m not too bad. I’ve been focusing my energy on drawing and other things instead of writing over the past few years, although I do have an idea for a writing project that I just need to get over the writer’s block for haha. How’ve you been???

 

@euodia-vision Yeah, it’s a place to…[Read more]

]]> 6ac6c8bade56a2ec44629dc76c75daad SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-1/page/6/#post-147827 Thu, 15 Jun 2023 09:02:25 -0400 @dekreel

HEELLLLOOOO! I’ve missed you too! I’ve been hanging around here a lot lately but not commenting on anything, because everyone seems to be so young talking about things I do not understand (#OldLady).

How are you doing? Working on anything lately?

]]> a0d25e1d0f3aeda7a8e7453201a279ae Joy's profile was updated https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/143254/ Thu, 15 Jun 2023 06:59:45 -0400 0 f94b654c02d1462e6cca6b622e7ff550 Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-1/page/6/#post-147826 Thu, 15 Jun 2023 06:55:25 -0400 I would like to bring this back once again. Good place to chat while you’re working on stuff. It’s supposed to help people be motivated to write if they know someone else is doing it with you while also chatting with you……. emphasis on *supposed to*, I’m notoriously bad at focusing when I’m talking to people haha, but I’ve always loved the…[Read more]

]]> b61286076fd51f7b4900528111834d4e Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/does-anyone-here-write-poetry-or-haikus/page/5/#post-146896 Thu, 08 Jun 2023 14:56:52 -0400 That’s fun, @elanor! 🙂

This is my most recent poem. Most of my poetry is brief in length. Usually, I get out an idea or a feeling and then stop.

 

Forgottenings

Sediments of nostalgia shape a place:

Like icing on a cake, wrinkles in a face

Aging, changing, but ever the same feelings,

Nameless emotions, memories stirring

Like ghosts,…[Read more]

]]> a55ba1e5c2380010890542c550640b6b Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/129678/#acomment-142332 Thu, 08 Jun 2023 14:28:17 -0400 Sure! 🙂

In reply to - Mallory O'Bier posted an update Wow. It’s been a while! How’s the forum these days? 😀 ]]> 7fd51676faa867b4b25b513eb6a88520 Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/art-sharing-for-all/page/68/#post-146874 Thu, 08 Jun 2023 04:47:05 -0400 @artsy-dragon Oh that robot is so cool

]]> f23fe580017cef8fb1e9e5400034e280 Joy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-castle/page/401/#post-146524 Tue, 06 Jun 2023 04:00:49 -0400 @keilah-h Hi um I am so so so sorry I’ve been unfaithful with posting here. I’m gonna go ahead and withdraw Hazel for now so Feather can do their own thing.

I’ve always been like this in roleplay-like situations… I’ll be super excited about it, prepare a character, brainstorm ideas, write the first segment…. and then immediately lose…[Read more]

]]> fe4a3eb85fd8242bf7ac333c253ead42 Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/129678/#acomment-141811 Mon, 05 Jun 2023 18:10:04 -0400 I’m doing good! I’m working a lot between my jobs as a photographer’s assistant and a clerk at the library, and writing in between. I’m working on finishing a draft of my WIP within the next three months and getting my blog up. I’ve been writing some poetry and song lyrics too. I’m also trying to do and learn as many new things as possible because…[Read more]

In reply to - Mallory O'Bier posted an update Wow. It’s been a while! How’s the forum these days? 😀 ]]> aa06fba829386fd365e3557ca4a27125 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-place-to-share-write-whatever-were-working-on-worldbuilding-plot-etc/page/68/#post-146375 Mon, 05 Jun 2023 17:59:14 -0400 Thanks, @freedom. Sometimes I have to remind myself that it’s not like I’m slaying a dragon, I’m just writing a book. How dangerous can it be?

]]> bf05fa0553b652a345e7f434cb0d250d Joy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All :) in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/art-sharing-for-all/page/67/#post-146255 Mon, 05 Jun 2023 04:25:13 -0400 I just finished a storybook-ish style piece featuring my “adopted” charries from a fan story I’ve been working on. Fun to work on 😀

]]> c8b28d06b9c87e3c57edc52a7e8e0d9f Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-place-to-share-write-whatever-were-working-on-worldbuilding-plot-etc/page/65/#post-145937 Fri, 02 Jun 2023 02:51:13 -0400 Thanks, @esther-c and @lightoverdarkness6. 😁👍

]]> f4ed35474e0764a754be6421de939e41 Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-place-to-share-write-whatever-were-working-on-worldbuilding-plot-etc/page/65/#post-145872 Thu, 01 Jun 2023 23:01:19 -0400 I’m working on convincing my writing to become a book and not just random scribbles. I’ll let y’all know how it goes. 🙂

]]> bf2e0995056a537b819aec54218f0193 Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/129678/#acomment-141267 Thu, 01 Jun 2023 22:54:02 -0400 Only the nice ones. I agree with you there! How are you doing these days?

In reply to - Mallory O'Bier posted an update Wow. It’s been a while! How’s the forum these days? 😀 ]]> 713e4737ae4ea568fd23c12943be8ce4 Joy replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/talking-about-are-fanfics/page/8/#post-145769 Thu, 01 Jun 2023 17:45:38 -0400 @keilah-h Miitopia is a game, Hermitcraft is a youtube series of a bunch of people playing Minecraft. It’s more interesting than it sounds, trust me haha.

]]> cd044919e61c90d2131c3a1753320030 Joy replied to the topic Fanfics Charries in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fanfics-charries/#post-145619 Wed, 31 May 2023 04:05:55 -0400 For some reason I feel embarrassed talking about my adopted characters aaa-

Right now I have two, but I had soooo many during childhood from kids TV shows.

]]> a7580d5db024c8527da71fe3a9e19709 Joy replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/talking-about-are-fanfics/page/7/#post-145406 Sun, 28 May 2023 20:32:41 -0400 I just started writing a fanfic the other day. I’ve had this idea stewing in my head for months which means now that I’m finally trying to write it down I have no idea where to even begin because I have sooooo many ideas and details packed into my brain that I MUST GET OUT ALL AT ONCE BUT I CAN’T-

Plus I admit I haven’t done any creative writing…[Read more]

]]> 5aaa90df266c9e10c1c75fe8018e090a Joy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-castle/page/395/#post-144782 Tue, 23 May 2023 23:59:21 -0400 @keilah-h Sorry for the wait!

In a flash, Hazel’s club was in her hand and poised to strike.

She knew she shouldn’t have wandered inside. Of course out of all the places she could have gone, this would be the place with the highest concentration of people. What was she thinking. Curse her curiosity…

She slowly started backing away, hoping to…[Read more]

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