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I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was so worried about Ezra in specific.
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@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍
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I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thing, is Ezra a soldier? That was kind of unclear. It seems like he was from what Joseph was thinking, but then it didn’t say. Otherwise, great job! 👏
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That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.
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@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.
Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆
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@liberty I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️
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Wow. That was kind of confusing without context, but intriguing character. Why is he writing the letter if he knows he won’t go to that college?
Lolol. Is algebra really that bad? 🤪
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@ellette-giselle Oh right. 🤦♀️ Sorry. I hope you have fun. Are you still away for Thanksgiving?
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@ellette-giselle Girl. 😳🫠
When are you going to post the next section?
(I’ll get to the snowball later this afternoon.)
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Lolol.
You don’t have to post your words, but you’re welcome to if you want. 😉
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@godlyfantasy12 @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 (I know, I already talked to you xD)
YOU’RE BACK!!!! 🎉🤗
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Praying. 🙏
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@the-ducktator That’s okay! I’m glad it wasn’t terrible. Sorry you got a cold, though.
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Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.
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