@hybridlore
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
The only problem is, I’ll have to figure out where that belongs in Cole’s character arc, since the timing on that is a little uncertain. I’m planning for this to be a duology, so that might be a great idea for the second book. I’ll just have to spend some time figuring out when I want to repair their relationship.
Ah, so you want th…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)
You’ve seen that already? I haven’t figured out how to make a slack account yet. 😂
4 is going well! Classmates have been a little emotional, though. The first day this year, one…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
First off, @whalekeeper had an amazing suggestion for Cole and Sara! Love that!
Second, I like the synesthesia. It’s interesting and I don’t really know much about it so I feel like i’m uncovering something new as I read. I may be the odd number on this, but I personally enjoy it.
how about you, @linus-smallprint ?
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.
I’m sorry I didn’t read sooner. XD I seem to have the unfortunate tendency of promising my feedback on multiple manuscripts. Nevertheless, I am here.
Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unr…
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh my goodness… I used to watch that so much with my siblings 😂 You’re right, it was a good show
yesss!!! I used to love it. I had an animal-themed birthday party when I was like 8 or 9 because of it.
I’m not really into it anymore, but an online friend of mine writes crossover fanfictions and the wild kratts characters appear in the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you girl! Yeah, basically. It’s a lot more than that though. Pretty much about a year ago, I realized I was never going to get better if I kept letting my parents take care of my health (my mom has been helping me with my health via vitamins and stuff she found online for about 5 years after multiple Doctors said I had no cure).…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey! Yeah, it has been a long time. I don’t come on here much unless summoned. Honestly I’m probably at the hardest point in my life rn so I’m doing pretty bad most days, but it feels like I’ve grown more in this year than my entire life somehow 😂
How are you?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m in Brookside Stories
one of the ladies emailed and said they are having tech problems at the moment. I think that’s why.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*rubs hands together* you just wait and see. XD
Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?
uh sure. lololol. Never heard that word before, but yes, it would rhyme.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*screeches* Fiends! Thou shalt pay for this!
Ooh, that looks fun! I think I’ll join the July one.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome! Which tent did you join?
Thanks! I really need to help Dale recover…he’s turning into a pessimist…but don’t worry! He’ll recover and find joy again. 🤭
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
So you thinking he’s gonna be your fav?
Oh fun! I’ll hunt you up when I feel like getting in an argument. XD XD
yes, you did call it.
How loyal are these people to thier gods? From this, I would guess that they wouldn’t be willing to die for them.
Not many Romans (or people who shared such a culture) were. T…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m so glad you liked the change!! One of my favorite scenes, honestly!
I have a passion for debating (kind of like Julian…..) and so I really got into it! It was so fun!
Julian is amazing
haha! Why’s that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning, the four sat about the campfire and discussed their next course of action.
“So, where to now?” Roland asked.
Leon rolled up his cloak and pushed it into his rucksack. “I say we keep pushing toward the Capital and s…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I read through everything so far!
This is looking great. I’m really impressed with your style. It’s so confident and… I don’t know how to phrase this. Occupied with the plot. There’s always something going on, and because of the realistic dialogue, I can really believe in the overall realism of the world.
I like how the world and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
yes, but the video looks NOTHING like the website does on my computer……
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t see myself in there.
I don’t see anyone.
i hate navigating new websites. lololol
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
LOl! It is kinds my profile here too, so I might have to apologize for being confusing. XD
CWW has some good memories though…
I can totally see that in your writing. For some reason that sentence just sounded a lot like some of the shorter snippets I’ve read from you.
Really? Now I’m curious. XD I’m always interested in how my w…[Read more]
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