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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
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12/28/24
Section 1.
(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉
if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…
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Kefa replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow  @arcticanimals @Esther-c @Jonasand @theducktator
o, btw, the voting ends December 31st, at 3:30pm EST
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.
I hope Amelia doesn’t die.
Oh dear.
That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.
Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.
Expect big sections in the time to come.
However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who d…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.
Yeah. That new Christian/new place/new family/ thrill has just started to ware off, and now he’s hitting the hard part.
Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?
Hmm. I’m not sure, I might cut that. In the fir…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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The next morning, Joseph, Amelia, and Beric bade farewell to the orphanage. Noah had spoken with one of the men in the church, and he offered to give the Conway’s a ride in his cart since Beric was still recovering from his injured leg.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint  @stephie   @liberty    @hybridlore     @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr   @loopylin   @freed_and_redeemed   @mineralizedwritings   @grcr
Here’s the movie balled. Oh the music! It was amazing!!!
This is a story I can stand behind concerning women fighting. She fought when she was defending women and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprint  @stephie   @liberty    @hybridlore     @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr   @loopylin   @freed_and_redeemed   @mineralizedwritings   @grcr
HAS ANYONE SEEN THIS!!!!!????
It was amazing!!!! I saw it in theaters with friends and am now trying to scrape together the money to take my family! It was AMAZIN…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thanks, Merry Christmas!!
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Kefa replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @theshadow  @arcticanimals @Esther-c @Jonas and @theducktator
Okay, so merry Christmas guys! Chapter 1 is out on page 9! hope you guys read through it and enjoy! Make sure to vote on who you want to see eliminated and what challenge the contestants participate in next! And thank you to those who voted! <3
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Your battle sounds a lot like mine, and I just want to say that, even though during the months it was happening it was one of the worst times of my life, I have grown a lot closer to God in the long run because of it. It forced me to seek Him and it helped me experience His Presence with me while I was going through it.
That’s very…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thank you for sharing that experience Hybrid, though I haven’t necessarily dealt with these same trials, I do know pain and doubt. I don’t want to force myself into this conversation, but I just wanted to say that God is aware of you both, and He wants to end your suffering, but there is a plan in all things. Anxiety is…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Uh, idk who’s participating in this, so here’s some tags.
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @arcticanimals theducktator @esther-c @jonas @liberty
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TheShadow replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Ah, okay, that story helps put it into perspective, thanks.
Oh my goodness, this exact thing happened to me a month ago. Prior to November 18th and since the summer, I have been having OCD thoughts. Then, on the 18th of last month, my faith pretty much crumbled and I didn’t believe in God at all. It got worse too a…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@power @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper  @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin [Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I signed up!!
Yay!!! Looking forward to seeing you there!
When is CWW?
Its website opens on January 6th. The official writing competition doesn’t start until the 7th. That gives an entire day for people to introduce themselves, get comfortable, and learn how everything works.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
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It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @calyhuge @koshka
Are any of you people planning on entering the contest????
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h   @linus-smallprint   @hybridlore   @mineralizedwritings @the_lost-journal  @calyhuge   @koshka
Are any of you people planning on entering the contest????
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