hybridlore

@hybridlore

Ahhhhhh! I tried to duck, but failed! I wrote my 100 words, thinking I’d brushed all the snow off, and smugly throw a ball at you…only to find that you were already throwing one at me!!! Mfmgghf…that was a lot of snow.

@ellette-giselle  @esther-c

A continuation of my previous snowball writing :

“You ready, Buddy?”

A sigh escaped Buddy’s lips before he could stop it.

A chuckle sounded from behind him.

“To tell the truth, Butch, I’m as nervous as a…” he searched for an applicable metaphor. “As a wave that’s tossed to and fro.”

Butch came to stand next to him…

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@hybridlore

Thank you!!!

She is very sweet. I like her character a lot.

@keilah-h  @liberty  @hybrid

anyone catching a theme here?!?!

There’s something that is going to link all my adult characters……

Now I’m gonna throw you a loop by posting a child.

ERNST!!! Josef and Rosemarie’s oldest!!

@liberty

Oh! You have to post them when you do! I have found making boards is very helpful for character development, and they are a great thing to look at when you need to feel inspired.

@keilah-h   @hybridlore

This is Josef’s wife.

They have kids too, if anyone’s interested…….

@keilah-h

Thanks! ww2

@hybridlore

Thank you!!

@liberty

Thanks! What do you mean? Like how am I putting it together? I do that on Canva.

Anyone want to see one of my MCs for The Crimson Rose?

@liberty   @keilah-h    @koshka    @linus-smallprint   @elishavet-pidyon   @rae   @hybridlore

@hybridlore

Yes.

@koshka

Have you ever heard of the six word story? I don’t remember who wrote it, but one of his friends challenged him to write the shortest story ever. He replied with “Baby shoes for sale. Never worn.”

That seriously sounds like a heap of fun! It’s actually a good exercise to try writing very concisely. I think I’ll try this out.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks so much!!!

Okay…

@ellette-giselle WAMMM *a snowball creams you* (except I want to see flash fiction under 75 words. *Raises eyebrows*)

@hybridlore AhA! Unsuspecting initiator, meet thy own deeds. *Snowball creams you*

@hybridlore

I know I included a longer passage, but that is something that I think I’m going to do in some situations. I want to have God’s word very clearly there, backing what I’m saying. I do have the scripture passages indented in the actual book, so it will be easier for a reader to just skim if they wanted.

Okay, I can work on the…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.

Thoughts Anyone?

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@hybridlore

I know right! To bad you didn’t post it at the beginning.

@hybridlore

I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️

Thank you!

@hybridlore  @loopylin   @theshadow   @keilah-h   @rae   @linus-smallprint   @whalekeeper  @theducktator  @esther-c  @liberty

Is it bad that this scene came to mind and I smiled with evil glee?

@hybridlore

whoops. Yes, I did.

Using a phone for KP is not the best.

@hybridlore

it’s kinda our Thanksgiving/Christmas vacation. I’m actually in the car on the way back right now.

lol. Everyone asks for word count, and I never know. I measure books by pages when I read, so I naturally do the same for writing. Let me get back to you on that tomorrow when I can look it up on my laptop.

i edited the book until I l…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’m glad it’s a little intriguing! He wrote it because he always told himself he would, but he has weird physical and mental conditions that make it hard for anyone to take him seriously. He’s trying to feel content.

The letter isn’t even going to make it to the school because of plot conflict.

@loopylin @hybridlore @godlyfantasy12 @anyone

Might as well post this because there’s no place for it in the actual story.

This letter is written by an aged-up character who knows he won’t get what he wants. He’s basically too weird and off-putting to be seen as a normal person. He is trying very hard, though.
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To: The professors of…[Read more]