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@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

I just had this thought: what if I added Etta’s POV to the whole story? Like switching back and forth between Libbie and Etta’s perspectives? I think it would be fun, and might help develop some of the side characters better, but it also might make things more confusing, and for simplicity’s sake might be better…[Read more]

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Let me know if any of this needs to be fleshed out more (or if it moves too fast and there should be more specific scenarios).

Things are about to get dicey…

1886

Come spring, many changes occurred. The first was Bert Hawley asking Pa for Clara’s hand in marriage. The wedding was planned for June, and Clara w…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @power @euodia-vision

I changed the first part. Is it better now, or worse?

1 ~ Murderer
Brandt angled his shiny blade against the sun, catching the light and flashing his signal across the dusty road below to the other clifftop. A series of flashes answered…

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@rae @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @esther-c @grcr @acancello @hybridlore  @keilah-h @freedomwriter76

Just because I feel like it, I’m posting a scene from my WIP. Ignore this if you don’t want to read it XD

Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.

He was watching the wind sway the trees,…

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@hybridlore

Ooooh I like it! tysm!

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Well it’s kind of a long story buuuut…….

While Sef is being abused, Lilitu gets visions of it, but he doesn’t know it’s her. Then he gets these urges from God to help her somehow, but he ignores them because he thinks it’s all in his head.

And then he finds out about her being abused and he feels really guilty because he feels…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Hey, do you want to make another one for Lilitu?

He has black hair with blue streaks in it, he has a twisted foot so he limps a lot. He was saved from the river as a baby because his parents set him adrift to save him from being kidnapped by the Pythonos. He was rescued and adopted by a loving couple. He has a crush on Sef but can’t…[Read more]

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OH MY GOSH I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!!!

@hybridlore

Um…not really XD

the theme color would probably be green? Idk. Also probably flowers? And some sad pictures XD

@hybridlore

Hey, I know you offered to make a moodboard for anyone interested, so do you want to make one for me?

So could you make one for Sef?

A little about her: She’s had a rough past, with her mother and sister being kidnapped. She was abused by a man who claimed to be her cousin and got custody of her. She relies a lot on Lilitu, as…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’d never heard of sprints either!

Speaking of sprints…I’m sprinting till :30.

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btw, I love your signature!

@hybridlore

nice!

@keilah-h

I do have Skyraptor and Nyx!

Cool! I thought you’d have some 🤣

Chocolate frogs???

Lol don’t worry, they’re not dark or anything 🤣 Basically they are chocolate treats enchanted to temporarily hop around when a kid opens up the box. Friends and family will give them to you as a Christmas gift, especially if you collect the wizard cards…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.

Yes, definitely. XDXD

Ok, yeah. I think I already have a few ideas…[Read more]

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else!

@hybridlore

Thank you! Yeah, I need to go back somewhere and add in her age… XD Marie is 13 years old, and William is 10.

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I’ll keep going! Should we end at :30?