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Yep, yep.

Glad it’s good.

This took me back to that one scene with the soldiers… 😳 I was like, “Oh no.”

Mhmmm.

I thought it might.

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This boy is a favorite of mine! Well, all of them are favorites, but Jace holds a special place in my heart! He’s such a joy!

Note: I called him a “boy”…not a “man”…I mean, he is a mature man (17)…but he gives off little brother vibes!)

What do you think/deduce he is like?

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
February 16th
The Empire

Loosing Aelic has been the most heartbreaking thing I have experienced since Adrian’s death. Aelic was such a dear brother, and we all love…

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I know poor Aelic. This is my fourth time though that scene as a draft, (read it several times just for fun) and it still gets me. Ugh.

(I’m wondering what’s happening to Aiden now that Martin believed and died too. It would have been tough to see his brother and his cousin killed like that.)

I know!!! The poor kid! 😱

Guess we’…[Read more]

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When Leon woke, the light in the shed was very dim. He could hear the sound of voices and pounding and feet hurrying back and forth outside. “I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers…

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I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.

Wow.

This is all that came to mind.

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Oh!

well this is a surprise.

First off, I had expected wails of protest.

Secondly, I was expecting comments about Aelic’s character, so the Julian remark totally threw me off. 😂

Thanks though!

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The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Marti…

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why?

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yay!

why? what are you worried about?

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Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…

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I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.

Guns.

Yay!!!

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Oh, my bad. When readers are reading the books without gaps in the middle, it would probably be easier, too. But yeah, just an intro to make it clear that it’s the same people would be great.

Thats what I’m thinking, but yeah, I can throw that it. I plan to release these as a box set all at once, so that should help.

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Especially with the way that you left off the last book–with Rolf, Roland, and Aelic getting separated from Leon and Julian because they wanted to go visit their family (right?), I think you should remind us.

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction t…[Read more]

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Y’all, this book is rough.

The group of soldiers came to a halt in the snowy planes. “We’ll camp here for the night,” came the order.

Hans Schmitz lowered his pack and rolled his aching shoulders. His brothers came and found him from f…

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@hybridlore where are they? I don’t see them on the part 1 document, is there the part 2 doc anywhere?

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They started out together and ended up in Landstraten at the end of book 3. I’m just picking up where I left them.

Oohh… that explains the creepy mask …

*nods and smiles*

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hopefully this doesn’t feel to fast. The end of this section is where the story really starts to kick back in. We had a lot of travel in the 3rd book, and I’m trying not to literally go back over ground we already covered.

It was a bitterswee…

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What about antagonists who do the wrong thing, but for a good reason? Or who have a realistic backstory that makes you feel sorry for them, or at the least, understand why they do what they do? Do you just not like characters like that in general?

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Thanks! I’m glad.

Okay, I’ll see what the others think. I liked it as a nice recap of everything that was happening.

Erich is one of the Stien children. He’s married and has a kid. They were the family that Julian, Roland, and Aelic were staying with when Rolf and Leon caught up with them.