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NEXT SECTION!!

 

Joseph and Noah were exhausted and slept until evening. It was Joseph who woke first. Getting up, he roused Noah, who was sleeping lightly. The two tidied the room and Joseph started downstairs. When he reached the bottom, one of the little…

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Deadline is today!

@hybridlore

Okay, I’ll take a look at it. I believe the first draft did have the original CS Lewis quote, (though I gave it to Darrien) I can check the original quote and then reword more appropriately.

 

Lol. They are chaotic. They range for four to twenty-four. lol. a wild bunch.

@hybridlore

Hey, the last part was happy too.

 

Any thoughts? What do you think of the Caddicks so far?

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NEXT SECTION!!

Happy happy day! It’s super long!!!

 

Joseph sat on his bed and carefully opened the journal, his fingers trembling with the wave of emotions that filled him. Memories of Aaron flooded his mind, and for a moment he was too blinded by tears to…

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@hybridlore

No, I’m just giving you a hard time. lol.

btw, did you finish LTBL?

@hybridlore

*steals Joseph and Eric from Ellette*

Wow. loyalties changed.

 

So I’m free to kill Asher, Julian, and Sabina?

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The next morning when Joseph woke, he lay in bed a moment, trying to remember what had happened the day before. All at once it came back to him and he scrambled to his feet. Yanking on his vest he hurried into the hall and knocked on Asher and E…

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@hybridlore

I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already

You’re not the first, lol

@ellette-giselle

It was pretty obvious. lol.

Do you mean the ship or something else? And if you mean the ship, I don’t know if I should take offence of that or not, lol, jk

 

Also, if anyone thinks that I am adorable because I am small and chubby, they are…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.

 

No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.

@hybridlore

Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.

 

I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉

 

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

 

You win.

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

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ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

 

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

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Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.

 

You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]

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Don’t rub it in.

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having hybridlore on the protection squad is scary! Why did I ever tell her about it?

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okay!! Fine!! I give in.

I’ll rewrite that whole scene tomorrow.

y’all win.

*slams down pencil in despair.*

it actually won’t hurt the plot much, and you are actually making sense.

fine. I’ll do it.

they go free. Both of them.

I can’t believe I’m doing this.

@hybridlore

*GASPETH*

*Throws confetti*

*Offers you a medal of honor for your bravery in the Character Protection Squad service*