hybridlore

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NEXT SECTION!!!

The next morning, the four sat about the campfire and discussed their next course of action.

“So, where to now?” Roland asked.

Leon rolled up his cloak and pushed it into his rucksack. “I say we keep pushing toward the Capital and s…

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I read through everything so far!

This is looking great. I’m really impressed with your style. It’s so confident and… I don’t know how to phrase this. Occupied with the plot. There’s always something going on, and because of the realistic dialogue, I can really believe in the overall realism of the world.

I like how the world and…[Read more]

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yes, but the video looks NOTHING like the website does on my computer……

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I don’t see myself in there.

I don’t see anyone.

i hate navigating new websites. lololol

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LOl! It is kinds my profile here too, so I might have to apologize for being confusing. XD

CWW has some good memories though…

I can totally see that in your writing. For some reason that sentence just sounded a lot like some of the shorter snippets I’ve read from you.

Really? Now I’m curious. XD I’m always interested in how my w…[Read more]

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Wait…is that tent already filled? I can’t see it as one of the tents to pick.

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I will ask to join that tent!

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I would love LOVE to join that writing camp!

@hybridlore FINALLY!!!!!!! The next and last part of -Snowballs- is here! Thanks for reminding this procrastinating person.

Anyway…I am planning to write a sequel…just because Dale has had such a hard time! (I feel so bad for him…poor boy) So, I’m hoping to write another story where he’s recovered from his trauma and is having a good t…[Read more]

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Okay…. yes that about matches them!

You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them.  We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉

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NOTHING! XD

I just told someone to kill off a character that she happened to like……

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Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.

I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]

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That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.

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Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]

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no, it makes perfect sense.

He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

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WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!

He also needs to die.

I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂

“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.

Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”

“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…

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great progress!!!

I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]

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Hey! Our could snap just ended up here in Canada, We are finally in plus temperatures, and there’s hope that spring exsists! I don’t need 10 snowballs being hurled at me!

But I guess I can’t argue with being hit.

Currently working on outlining my second book right now. I will let you know when I’ve met the quota.

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okay thanks! I’ll think about it!