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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I would love LOVE to join that writing camp!
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore FINALLY!!!!!!! The next and last part of -Snowballs- is here! Thanks for reminding this procrastinating person.
Anyway…I am planning to write a sequel…just because Dale has had such a hard time! (I feel so bad for him…poor boy) So, I’m hoping to write another story where he’s recovered from his trauma and is having a good t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay…. yes that about matches them!
You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them. We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore
Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.
I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.
Lol 😂😂 I like Roland
haha, me too.
Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.
Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍
ME TOO!!!!!
Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
no, it makes perfect sense.
He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.
He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!
He also needs to die.
I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂
“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.
Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”
“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
great progress!!!
I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!
I sure like Cole.
When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey! Our could snap just ended up here in Canada, We are finally in plus temperatures, and there’s hope that spring exsists! I don’t need 10 snowballs being hurled at me!
But I guess I can’t argue with being hit.
Currently working on outlining my second book right now. I will let you know when I’ve met the quota.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
okay thanks! I’ll think about it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
what is it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.
The 50 I’ve been saving for a
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I wrote 500 words.
I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.
I shall now snowball you!!!!
SNOWBALL X20
AND
YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!
SO.
THERE.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)
So glad you liked the section!
Yeah, poor Roland.
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