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Possible (probable) scene for Book #2 of my fantasy series idea🤭

let me know what y’all think👀

The Mercenary camp seemed naught much fond of having guests.

Couldn’t they at the very least be w…

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NEXT SECTION!!!

“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.

“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.

Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…

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You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

Thanks, and I think it’s fine because you don’t have to explicitly state it. Is there a reason why, or are you getting to that?

Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

Your welcome. Is he going to have ano…[Read more]

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I think so, although if she doesn’t I can send it to her again.

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The story is looking really good so far, although I’m a little confused by Cole. Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school? Sorry, I just need a little clarification. Each character is good though, I particularly find Alec interesting.

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In Canada, do you have the same guaranteed rights as in the US’s Constitution? I’m assuming it’s very similar. Freedom of assembly, freedom of speech, freedom of religion, etc.?

Yes, we do have the same rights, but that doesn’t stop teachers from grading things based on what you write about instead of the actual quality of writi…[Read more]

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Awkward bathroom conversations. Fun…

A monitor is watching. Creepy. I do know that feeling of, I could answer what I really think, but I know I will get bad marks. Although, the stakes are higher for Everette and Sara. Why does this class keep on reminding me of my Grade 11 English 20?

I see some family tension on the horizon in…[Read more]

@hybridlore thanks!

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It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

Gotta agree with Ellette on this. You write very clearly.

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Yeah, I did get a feeling he didn’t love what he was doing when he was talking with Cole.

Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!

@hybridlore

It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job?

I knew he did something with technology and people, and I knew he worked with the government. This didn’t come as a surprise to me at all. It was good.

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GIRL!

How do you do it?!?!

I am so hooked! OH MY WORD! I want this made into a MOVIE!!

Wow! This is so cool. I’m worried about Everett! I hope he makes it out of this one okay. What I wouldn’t give to be in his head as he reads through all those questions!!

AND ALEC!!! Oh my word! This is great!!

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Thank you so much!!!!

I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
I appreciate you so so SO much, girl <3

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Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!

The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.

The point of…[Read more]

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Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕

Hopefully we can have her come check on it if its still acting up.

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*Scream of pleasure!!!*

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KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑

*indignant sniff*

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“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

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Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

Sounds good.

*eyes you suspiciously*

*grins evilly*

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Oh good. It’s been glitching all morning on my end.

I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.

You 100% are!!

When did Leon start calling the governor Walter? I was a bit confused, but I probably just missed the part where you introduced him.

When the governor told him to. XD

It happened when they were looking over t…[Read more]