@hybridlore
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
Thank you so much for the feedback! I loved this! It’s super helpful.
Side note: interestingly enough, you said that the second book is your least favorite, while I’ve preferred it so far to the first one. We’ll see how the third and fourth compare.
You know what, Aaron will always be my favorite character, but I’m growing to lik…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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whaley replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @mineralizedwritings @rae @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @hybridlore @calyhuge @smiley @raxforge @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle
I’m shooting blind, here. No idea who likes these books.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
My first thought is that you would need to save Joseph, because it would be strange to kill off the main character three quarters (four fifths?) of the way through the book.
well, i did that is the last book. *shrug*
Hmm. Beric? I see where you’re going with that. But poor Amelia!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.
What if you could only save one of those three?
(And I’m totally just being a beast because no matter what you say I’m not changing anything.)
Eh, I wasn’t surprised.
I didn’t think you would be surprised, I just wanted to know thoughts. Like does it mak…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
No comment about the Uncle betraying them?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Ellette!!!!! 🥺🥺
What are you going to do to them??
lol. Wouldn’t you like to know?!
Who would you be the most upset about if I wipe them all out?
Glad the scene is good.
Preachy? In what way?
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
That emoji contradicts those words. l…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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Smiley replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 2 days ago
Yes I can relate to the thankfulness of God’s mercy (no chance I deserve it)
It’s mostly in the brainstorming phase
Ooh cool
Yeah I think for me I had to take a complete step back in a way to show God I’m willing and because of that I think He was able to open my eyes to the in-person peopl…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 3 days ago
@hybridlore I think so.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 3 days ago
@theshadow let me know what he thinks!
@hybridlore @whalekeeper My brother wants to join, but so far they haven’t let him in or sent him an email or anything. (That second one might be because he never checks his emails though, lol)
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 3 days ago
But I definitely can be very bossy at times.
Same. That, (and my obsession with ducks), is where my username came from. I order one of my siblings to do something, and my dad says, “The Ducktator has spoken.”😂 How many siblings do you have?
I have 3 sisters, 2 brothers.
I am not interested in a…
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whaley replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 3 days ago
I think my parents have just given up trying to make me go to bed. I was up past 2 am reading the other day.😅 How many little siblings do you have? I have 5.
Yep, mine gave up too. 😂 I have five younger siblings, three boys, two girls.
@smiley @hybridlore @idk?
Like I see everywhere that being the oldest sister is like a ton of work…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 3 days ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
I know! I love it, too!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@power @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity
Some people…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 4 days ago
That’s literally me and my sister, Lydibug. She joined, posted a few bunny and hedgehog pictures in a whirlwind of glory, and disappeared around three days later. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 week, 4 days ago
@hybridlore aww that’s a shame
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The Ducktator posted an update 1 week, 4 days ago
@hybridlore
I GOT THE OUT OF TIME 10TH ANNIVERSARY EDITION!!!!! IT’S SO PRETTY! - Load More
I did too!! I know, I love it!! Have you read the new scenes yet?
I’m waiting to reread it until after I finish my other series I got for Christmas. Of Fire and Ash and Of Sea and Smoke. Have you read them?
I haven’t read the new chapters yet. I’m planning on rereading the whole thing soon, but I have a long list of books to read and I also got several other new books including The Tenant of Wildfell Hall, so I’m not sure where they’ll fall in the list.😃
I love Of Fire and Ash and Of Sea and Smoke! I can’t wait for the next one, and I ship Ceridwen…[Read more]
Exactly 👍 I gotcha. The Tenant of Wildfell Hall… I’ve never heard of that one. Did you get it for Christmas?
Oh, cool!! I have only read the first one so far, but I really liked it. There is a lot of battle, but the author’s world and descriptions are so good.
I know, Ceridwen and Finnian are so perfect together 🥰🥰 I love Finnian.
Have you t…[Read more]
The Tenant of Wildfell Hall was actually a birthday present. It’s by Anne Bronte.
I know what you mean. I kept losing track of the battles.😅 I just retook the quiz because I couldn’t remember my results, and I would also bond with a shadower.
Oh, cool! Is your birthday right around Christmas, or has it been a while?
Nice!! Yeah, I feel like that’s one of the more popular ones. I believe when I had my parents take it they both got that one (but I might be remembering wrong.) also, the author is a shadower too.
My birthday is December 26th. I’m 16 now.😃
Oh cool! I tried to get my brother to take it yesterday, even though he hasn’t read the books, but he wasn’t paying attention.
No way! That’s really cool. Is it fun having your birthday right after Christmas, or do you wish it was spaced out more?
Cool! (Lol, I forgot how old I was for a second.) I turned 16 in September!
Lol, yeah, that sounds typical
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It’s fun! I get my birthday presents under the Christmas tree, I never have to do school, and my dad doesn’t have to work! Additionally, I love peppermint, and it’s easy to find peppermint stuff for my cake this time of year.
Cool!! A peppermint cake sounds interesting . . . Funny, ’cause I’ve always loved apple pie and so one year I had that for my birthday (September is still too early for it to be everywhere, though.) What do you usually pair it with–chocolate?